A Poetic Pause
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Comment from Destiny Awaits Darling
I LOVE this Haiku that you wrote! It is such a beautiful metaphor for how nature is our 'happy place;' our place of peace! I can FEEL every word of this poem, and it makes me want to run outside, lay on the grass, and experience the warm glow of the sun on my face.
Absolutely STUNNING. Thank you for brightening my day with this beautiful poem! I'm going to go straight outside, now! :D <3
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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I LOVE this Haiku that you wrote! It is such a beautiful metaphor for how nature is our 'happy place;' our place of peace! I can FEEL every word of this poem, and it makes me want to run outside, lay on the grass, and experience the warm glow of the sun on my face.
Absolutely STUNNING. Thank you for brightening my day with this beautiful poem! I'm going to go straight outside, now! :D <3
Comment Written 15-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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I'd like to put a smile on your face. I hope you have a great wonderful day thank you for your kind review!
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You are so welcome! You have an amazing day, too!! :)
Comment from JT traveller
Ah yes! I know the feeling. It is a feeling of being on familiar ground. A magnetic pull indeed. Apt choice of words. Beautifully composed and a fantastic illustration to complement your words. Congratulations on a stellar effort Lea. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Ah yes! I know the feeling. It is a feeling of being on familiar ground. A magnetic pull indeed. Apt choice of words. Beautifully composed and a fantastic illustration to complement your words. Congratulations on a stellar effort Lea. Jacqueline
Comment Written 15-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thank you you're always so kind and thoughtful in your reviews and your comments. I appreciate them so very much! Have a great day!
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Just honest I guess. If a poem moves me I say so. J xx
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The first thing I did after the pandemic when I was stuck abroad and returned home to England, was go to the park and take of my shoes and walk on the grass in my bare feet, I had missed home so much and was unable to return for almost 2 years. I missed my family and I missed the green fields of home. Your Haiku resonated with me here Lea, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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The first thing I did after the pandemic when I was stuck abroad and returned home to England, was go to the park and take of my shoes and walk on the grass in my bare feet, I had missed home so much and was unable to return for almost 2 years. I missed my family and I missed the green fields of home. Your Haiku resonated with me here Lea, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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I'm glad it did yeah. I was felt that was powering having your naked feet in the earth connecting that way. Thank you dolly again I appreciate your review I hope you have a great day!