just karmic fate
meeting my fate2 total reviews
Comment from JT traveller
Interesting last line. Fate is predetermined, one's destiny. Karma is the energy returned to you, that you yourself create.
A couple of suggestions, perhaps a comma between karma and fate, or change one of the words, either karma or fate.
Also, an illustration or photograph would make your work stand out more.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Interesting last line. Fate is predetermined, one's destiny. Karma is the energy returned to you, that you yourself create.
A couple of suggestions, perhaps a comma between karma and fate, or change one of the words, either karma or fate.
Also, an illustration or photograph would make your work stand out more.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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thanks for the suggestions
Comment from kahpot
Karma is a magical thing when it happens, sometimes we just know when something is right, what a very romantic poem for the one you love, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Karma is a magical thing when it happens, sometimes we just know when something is right, what a very romantic poem for the one you love, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 15-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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thanks as always