Lonely Leo
A short story for the club challenge17 total reviews
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your free verse poem - Good picture presentation - poem flows well and tells an interesting story about Leo and his ad for a female companion who has a desire to be co-dependent and care for a free loader lion who claims to disabled, but still active enough for companionship and eating food served to him frequently while he recovers. A good life indeed for the right lioness - probably with baggage - lol. Good poem, I like you sense of humor my friend. AP
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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I like your free verse poem - Good picture presentation - poem flows well and tells an interesting story about Leo and his ad for a female companion who has a desire to be co-dependent and care for a free loader lion who claims to disabled, but still active enough for companionship and eating food served to him frequently while he recovers. A good life indeed for the right lioness - probably with baggage - lol. Good poem, I like you sense of humor my friend. AP
Comment Written 12-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Thank you AP, yes, I am trying different things, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This post about Lonely Leo fits the club writing prompt well. I thought you did a fun job personifying the lion. It did not evoke any real reference to "Lion King" either, so original thinking here. The photo is great. Nice share!
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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This post about Lonely Leo fits the club writing prompt well. I thought you did a fun job personifying the lion. It did not evoke any real reference to "Lion King" either, so original thinking here. The photo is great. Nice share!
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A good image and story to go with it, kahpot.
-A good introduction to Leo.
-He gives us good detailed description of himself;
of course, he would do that, as king of the beasts.
-He also had definite ideas for the Queen who will fulfill this role.
-A good ending for any female wanting to apply.
-I enjoyed reading this.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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-A good image and story to go with it, kahpot.
-A good introduction to Leo.
-He gives us good detailed description of himself;
of course, he would do that, as king of the beasts.
-He also had definite ideas for the Queen who will fulfill this role.
-A good ending for any female wanting to apply.
-I enjoyed reading this.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are very welcome.
Comment from John Ciarmello
Great work here, kahpot! This ad for a partner seems to fit Leo to a tee. His demands are reasonable, and he will find a great suitor. :) I loved this! Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Great work here, kahpot! This ad for a partner seems to fit Leo to a tee. His demands are reasonable, and he will find a great suitor. :) I loved this! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much, it is so encouraging while I am practicing prose, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
The story grabbed my interest. The dialogue is believable and funny. I like your lion's personification. And the characters seem real.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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The story grabbed my interest. The dialogue is believable and funny. I like your lion's personification. And the characters seem real.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from jmdg1954
I think Leo will have problem finding a suitable mate. How could he, with providing everything, she'd be a fool not to apply.
This is a good entry for the club fiction challenge.
John
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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I think Leo will have problem finding a suitable mate. How could he, with providing everything, she'd be a fool not to apply.
This is a good entry for the club fiction challenge.
John
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from country ranch writer
Dear Leo,
Just look around you. Do see shea wild nymph wanting to keep you den warm, clean it even let you serve her to bear you young. I am afraid the are hiding deep deep in the forest if green and you can see them. Take a vacation dear King if Beasts an wait awhilembe for getting in to deep.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Dear Leo,
Just look around you. Do see shea wild nymph wanting to keep you den warm, clean it even let you serve her to bear you young. I am afraid the are hiding deep deep in the forest if green and you can see them. Take a vacation dear King if Beasts an wait awhilembe for getting in to deep.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Comment from LateBloomer
Hello kahpot, I hope that Lonely Leo becomes Lucky Leo and that he finds his Queen. Leo sounds like a real catch for someone who is the outdoorsy type. A fun story. Great photo. Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing.
LateBloomer
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Hello kahpot, I hope that Lonely Leo becomes Lucky Leo and that he finds his Queen. Leo sounds like a real catch for someone who is the outdoorsy type. A fun story. Great photo. Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing.
LateBloomer
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Thank you, I am sure love will find him, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from damommy
If I were a lioness, I'd certainly apply to be his queen. He looks like he could provide a good life, even though I'd be the provider of food. He's so handsome.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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If I were a lioness, I'd certainly apply to be his queen. He looks like he could provide a good life, even though I'd be the provider of food. He's so handsome.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Thank you so very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Julcia
I had no idea that lions have the ability to post personal ads. I am
impressed with Lonely Leo's ability to use language. Lonely seeks a Queen. He does a super job at
articulating his requirements for a
mate. She must run to get daily food and enjoy rough sex for procreation. A female's dream!
I predict Leo will have a plethora of
of applicants and make a great choice of Queen. Leo will be lonely
no more.
A well written work which evidences
creativity and delighful use of language.
Julcia
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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I had no idea that lions have the ability to post personal ads. I am
impressed with Lonely Leo's ability to use language. Lonely seeks a Queen. He does a super job at
articulating his requirements for a
mate. She must run to get daily food and enjoy rough sex for procreation. A female's dream!
I predict Leo will have a plethora of
of applicants and make a great choice of Queen. Leo will be lonely
no more.
A well written work which evidences
creativity and delighful use of language.
Julcia
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, Leo turned out to be a very smart Lion, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
