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Novella - Unwanted Dog

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Adopted By Unknown Stranger In Wal-Mart Parking Lo

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Comment from GWHARGIS
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This chapter reminded me that with less at our fingertips, we find more to do. I rarely said I was bored while growing up. If I said I was bored, my mom would give me a list of things to do. So, I would read. Took me places and showed me new and interesting places. Can't wait for your description of the creek. Gretchen

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2023


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    Appreciate your insights and the review.
Comment from BethShelby
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The dog in the picture looks like one that was my constant companion as a kid. I am wondering if you knew Dusty's parents, or what you know of them comes from what Dusty told you. A lot of your growing year sound sort of like where I grew up. I actually got hot brick wrapped in cloth for my feet on cold night like you did. The bedrooms were cold at night.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2023


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Hey! Wait si will go fishing with you too, I am in the mood for fresh caught catfush with huspuppiest and coleslaw and pork and beans, maybe some ice tea to drink too.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
    Had a good time fishing that day. Appreciate the review.
reply by country ranch writer on 09-Mar-2023
    🐟🐠🦈
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Hey! Wait si will go fishing with you too, I am in the mood for fresh caught catfush with huspuppiest and coleslaw and pork and beans, maybe some ice tea to drink too.

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 Comment Written 08-Mar-2023


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    Appreciate your comments and the review.
reply by country ranch writer on 09-Mar-2023
    Smiles🐩
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I was born in 1954. I don't remember what year it was when we got our first color TV, but I do remember it. Thank you for sharing this post with us. I am really enjoying reading.

Country doctor Phillip Gardner tended to Lois as her labor pains began. (I'm wondering, about 85% sure, doctor, should have a capital 'D'. It will be interesting what other reviewers say.)

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 Comment Written 08-Mar-2023


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    Appreciate your insights and the review.