Creepy Crawly Worms
They are gross.5 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good lowku poem you have penned about creepy crawly words. That would be totally disgusting. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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This is a very good lowku poem you have penned about creepy crawly words. That would be totally disgusting. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Thanks!
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You are so welcome!
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Please help me in the contest. Please.
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Please read my marvelous moniku poem and twelve word poems
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet , you now have 3 vote!
I never had a problem feeding mealworms to my Lolita but earthworms I really hate touching.
They are gross , that's why I want to be cremated.
While bacteria decomposes our corpse humidity, heat and even the weight of the ground will slowly corrode our wooden coffin .. once the coffin collapses earthworms can join in on the feast and start eating our matter with other insects and micro organisms.
That s double gross.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Ciao poet , you now have 3 vote!
I never had a problem feeding mealworms to my Lolita but earthworms I really hate touching.
They are gross , that's why I want to be cremated.
While bacteria decomposes our corpse humidity, heat and even the weight of the ground will slowly corrode our wooden coffin .. once the coffin collapses earthworms can join in on the feast and start eating our matter with other insects and micro organisms.
That s double gross.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Thanks!
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Please read my marvelous moniku and twelve word poems.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the Lowku contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated, and it meets the requirements. Although, I know worms are important to our ecosystem, the visual works well for your poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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This is a good entry into the Lowku contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated, and it meets the requirements. Although, I know worms are important to our ecosystem, the visual works well for your poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thanks!
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You are welcome.
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Comment from JT traveller
Your poem stuck to the rules of the lowly. The accompanying illustration matched your words well. For me, however, it needs a little improvement. Perhaps a topic a little more disgusting? Maybe it is just me, I don't find worms particularly gross. Maggots, yes, worms, no. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Your poem stuck to the rules of the lowly. The accompanying illustration matched your words well. For me, however, it needs a little improvement. Perhaps a topic a little more disgusting? Maybe it is just me, I don't find worms particularly gross. Maggots, yes, worms, no. Best of luck.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thanks.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness, is your home outdoors? Your post is full of horror here and I don't think I have ever had a worn inside my house, but lots of other insects visit often, a fun post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Oh my goodness, is your home outdoors? Your post is full of horror here and I don't think I have ever had a worn inside my house, but lots of other insects visit often, a fun post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Indoors. I have not either.
