Good Night Sweet Dragon
Is Feng Shui for real46 total reviews
Comment from Terry Broxson
LOL, This is great! I was not sure where you were going with it, but I did enjoy the ending. The story is very creative, but it does bring to mind an aunt of mine. My mother's younger sister had eleven husbands that we know about. I wonder if she had one of these bracelets? Excellent work. Terry.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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LOL, This is great! I was not sure where you were going with it, but I did enjoy the ending. The story is very creative, but it does bring to mind an aunt of mine. My mother's younger sister had eleven husbands that we know about. I wonder if she had one of these bracelets? Excellent work. Terry.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you. I do have a friend who has had seven husbands(her name is not Sandy). At this moment, my friend divorced and living with one of her kids. Life is interesting.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Very entertaining. What a great tale. It makes me want to go out and find a "Sweet Dragon" bracelet. I am very patient and I can wait as long as it takes. However, based on your experience I will not be throwing the bracelet away...EVER!
Very nice read, entertaining, and interesting.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Very entertaining. What a great tale. It makes me want to go out and find a "Sweet Dragon" bracelet. I am very patient and I can wait as long as it takes. However, based on your experience I will not be throwing the bracelet away...EVER!
Very nice read, entertaining, and interesting.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you. If a dragon sat on my stomach, I would do whatever he asked me to. Lol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a good story. There are no writing errors, and the story has logic, amusement, and a bit of scary. Wishing you the best of luck in the Let's Write Some Prose contest.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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This is a good story. There are no writing errors, and the story has logic, amusement, and a bit of scary. Wishing you the best of luck in the Let's Write Some Prose contest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you, and thanks for the six stars. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile here and your story reminded me of troll dolls and if one is bought for you, then you can never throw them away as it is bad luck and the reason why I still have two of them in cupboards in my basement given to me in the 1970s! Ha ha ha, so your story has great significance to me, glad I don't have to wear them on my wrist though, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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You made me smile here and your story reminded me of troll dolls and if one is bought for you, then you can never throw them away as it is bad luck and the reason why I still have two of them in cupboards in my basement given to me in the 1970s! Ha ha ha, so your story has great significance to me, glad I don't have to wear them on my wrist though, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you, and thanks for sharing your interesting doll story with me. I never heard of troll dolls before.
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Really? They were big in the 1970s, ugly looking things x
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I loved your Fen Shui story and too wondered about how lucky to have had husband number seven, or maybe it should be the husbands we should feel for LOL Very entertaining read, and I don't blame her for hedging her bets. Good luck in the contest.
edit -I retrieved the bracelt (bracelet)
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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I loved your Fen Shui story and too wondered about how lucky to have had husband number seven, or maybe it should be the husbands we should feel for LOL Very entertaining read, and I don't blame her for hedging her bets. Good luck in the contest.
edit -I retrieved the bracelt (bracelet)
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you, and thanks for catching the oops. I will edit and correct. I can't imagine having seven husbands in one lifetime. It sounds like a bit much to me. Lol
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Huh? I traveled the road from beginning to end and somewhere along the way lost where I wanted to go. I need to read this a second time and understand who married whom when and traipse around the goring details. Good luck.
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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Huh? I traveled the road from beginning to end and somewhere along the way lost where I wanted to go. I need to read this a second time and understand who married whom when and traipse around the goring details. Good luck.
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Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you. I'm sorry you got lost along the way. It wasn't my intent. At he begging of Sandy's long speech I have added, Sandy continued, to make it plain the reader understands who is talking. I apoligize for leading you astray.
