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Good Night Sweet Dragon

Is Feng Shui for real

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Comment from papa55mike
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Well, maybe the money will come later. There's always a twist with those kind of things; nothing is free. What a wonderfully written story.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
    Thank you for reading and for your kind comments. I do have a Feng Shui bracelet, and I'm still waiting for the money. Who knows, maybe it will jinx me for making fun of it in this story.
Comment from Julie Lau
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Great story, pb, which I had to read as I have a special rapport with dragons, which includes drawing and painting them too. Also I had a dragon bracelet which I bought in China, destroyed in a closing door, but I kept its ugly little jewelled head to draw. It hasn't bitten me yet. You write well and I'm looking forward to reading more. Julie Lau

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
    Thank you, and thanks for sharing you amusing dragon story with me. You best watch out, that dragon might get you yet. Lol.
Comment from nomi338
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Okay. For me the best message is do not start something you may be uncomfortable in continuing. It is best to never get involved with mystical mumbo jumbo to begin with. A lot of that stuff involves communing with evil spirits, demons. They are powerful and can have super natural power over believing humans. It is best to keep your distance at all time as much as is possible.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
    Thank you, and thanks for the advice. I agree with you, one should avoid the unknown if they don't know what they are doing. This is only a fictional story, but I have heard some spooky real-life stories about the supernatural.
Comment from jacquelyn popp
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Your humor fiction is a wonderful entry for the Let's Write Something Prose contest. Good luck in the contest. I enjoyed reading your fun and imaginative story. I like how you had the two friends, discussing whether it was real or not. Your story made me laugh. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
    Thank you. I do have a Feng Shui bracelet and so far it hasn't make me wealthy or given any luck in the lotto. Lol
Comment from Douglas Goff
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This is a wonderful entry for the Let's Write Some Prose contest. Maybe that dragon will bless you with a win.
HA!

Seems like you had fun writing this. Nice work!
D

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
    Thank you. Yes, I enjoy writing funny stories more than anything. I like your writing because if often contains humor. Have a wonderful day.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Haha, LJ, what a fun and imaginative story.
I enjoyed reading it. I liked the way you had
the two friends discussing whether it was real
or not. I can't imagine anyone spending money
on that bracelet thinking it would work. Your
story had a fun twist with the sweet dragon
making an appearance.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
    Thank you. I have had one of those bracelets for a long time. I'm still poor. LOL
Comment from Ric Myworld
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It's always great for sometime during the day to stop off or run into something that puts a smile on our faces or makes us laugh. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
    Thank you. I saw one of those bracelets on Facebook. It gave me the idea for this story. If those things worked, everyone would have one.
Comment from damommy
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Well, I'm convinced. I think if someone tries to give me a dragon bracelet, I might decline the gift. However, it might be fun to have a dragon watching over me. Apparently, she needed the luck with seven marriages under her belt. This is a great story. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
    Thank you. Yeah, it might be fun to have your own personel dragon. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Comment from Jim Wile
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This was an enjoyable story to read, PBB. I learned something too about feng shui bracelets. It does seem like something not to be trifled with.

I had a certain ritual I used to go through when I was a kid that this story reminded me of. The greatest fear of the time was nuclear war, and somehow I got it in my head that if I didn't get into my bed at night in a certain way, it might unleash a nuclear war. My reasoning was that it hasn't happened yet, so I'd better not change the way I got into bed or it just might! I guess I didn't want to mess with feng shui either.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
    Thank you, and thanks for sharing your childhood story with me. Your plan must have worked because we never had a nuclear war.
Comment from w.j.debi
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Things like this are rather spooky. It seems so absorb to believe and yet... Your narration is good and drew me into the story. Like your main character, I wouldn't have taken the bracelet seriously either, but then, I haven't been visited by an insistent dragon.
Thank you for sharing this enjoyable read.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
    Thank you. I saw this bracelet for sale on Facebook, so I used it as an inspiration for this story. I doubt that a bracelet could bring a person wealth, but who knows.