It's Boogers Time
Eating boogers is gross4 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Lowku poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery that reminds me of our boys when they were that age! That is gross! lol Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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This is a very well written Lowku poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery that reminds me of our boys when they were that age! That is gross! lol Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Thank you and for the best wishes!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the Lowku contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated, and it meets the requirements. Although, I think in the visual the child is eating mashed peas, the snotty nose makes the visual works well for your poem. Good luck in the contest. I voted for this entry.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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This is a good entry into the Lowku contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated, and it meets the requirements. Although, I think in the visual the child is eating mashed peas, the snotty nose makes the visual works well for your poem. Good luck in the contest. I voted for this entry.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you and for your vote!
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You are welcome. Hope you win.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness a mixture of snot and baby food, enough to put you off your dinner! It is a good job I've eat for the day, a fun post, love the picture, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Oh my goodness a mixture of snot and baby food, enough to put you off your dinner! It is a good job I've eat for the day, a fun post, love the picture, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well, that's certainly gross.
You did a great job with this
contest entry. Your syllable
count was correct per line,
the picture added to your
work, and the overall message
was clear.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Well, that's certainly gross.
You did a great job with this
contest entry. Your syllable
count was correct per line,
the picture added to your
work, and the overall message
was clear.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Thank you and for the best wishes too!