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Comment from royowen
I can see where you got your interest in country music from. And I like the fact you didn't really blame environmental issues on your rebellious ways, but thanks to Dusty you realised that it can shape you, but not define you. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : Multiplied his (acerage) acreage?
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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I can see where you got your interest in country music from. And I like the fact you didn't really blame environmental issues on your rebellious ways, but thanks to Dusty you realised that it can shape you, but not define you. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : Multiplied his (acerage) acreage?
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Appreciate the catch. Learned many things from Dusty. Appreciate your comments and the review.
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Good job
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this addition to your story with us. Dusty seemed like and awesome man and I am enjoying learning more about him. I couldn't see any reason for improvement.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you for sharing this addition to your story with us. Dusty seemed like and awesome man and I am enjoying learning more about him. I couldn't see any reason for improvement.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Teri7
Brett, I enjoyed reading this chapter you have penned. I love the picture you chose to go with your words. I need to try to catch back up. Thanks for sharing! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Brett, I enjoyed reading this chapter you have penned. I love the picture you chose to go with your words. I need to try to catch back up. Thanks for sharing! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Ulla
Brett, this is such a heartfelt continuation to your life story as you pay tribute to man who took you in and to his family. I can so identify with this. Thanks a lot for sharing this. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Brett, this is such a heartfelt continuation to your life story as you pay tribute to man who took you in and to his family. I can so identify with this. Thanks a lot for sharing this. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Terry Broxson
Brett, I enjoyed the story, but I may have jumped into the middle of it as I don't understand what Country Comfort is. I assume it is a place, and you probably discussed it in another chapter. For readers like me, you might think about something like a foot note in your notes. You don't need a recap I am not suggesting that.
One other thought. For the old folks on FS like me it would be good if you considered using Advanced Editor and chose a larger size font, maybe a 16. It is easier to read.
Your writing is very good, these suggestions are just food for thought. Terry.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Brett, I enjoyed the story, but I may have jumped into the middle of it as I don't understand what Country Comfort is. I assume it is a place, and you probably discussed it in another chapter. For readers like me, you might think about something like a foot note in your notes. You don't need a recap I am not suggesting that.
One other thought. For the old folks on FS like me it would be good if you considered using Advanced Editor and chose a larger size font, maybe a 16. It is easier to read.
Your writing is very good, these suggestions are just food for thought. Terry.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your suggestions and the review. Country Comfort was the name of the farm I grew up on in Nashville.
Comment from patcelaw
I really do like the story of you telling how that you first got your pen and paper from Dusty for you to write during a thunderstorm. I am so happy that you took up writing and that you are writing your autobiography. Patricia.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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I really do like the story of you telling how that you first got your pen and paper from Dusty for you to write during a thunderstorm. I am so happy that you took up writing and that you are writing your autobiography. Patricia.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
There is one thing for sure that everyone should pick up on quickly, which is your love and admiration for Dusty. I think you and he both were blessed when he took you from the orphanage. You did an excellent job. Have a blessed day. Shirley
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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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There is one thing for sure that everyone should pick up on quickly, which is your love and admiration for Dusty. I think you and he both were blessed when he took you from the orphanage. You did an excellent job. Have a blessed day. Shirley
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Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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So true about how I feel about Dusty. Appreciate your insights and the review.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
This is a gorgeous and hard felt right? I. Wrote? With you the whole way while I was reading it. The realism in your story is evident in your writing is well as experience very beautiful rendition Of these moments in life very touching. I found it to be real and human completely believable.
Aesthetically speaking. I found no errors in spelling punctuation sentence structure or anything at all I find it to be enjoyable and Written by clearly a talented writer.
I thank you so much for your submission and look forward to the next one! Thank you so much and have a great and wonderful day!
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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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This is a gorgeous and hard felt right? I. Wrote? With you the whole way while I was reading it. The realism in your story is evident in your writing is well as experience very beautiful rendition Of these moments in life very touching. I found it to be real and human completely believable.
Aesthetically speaking. I found no errors in spelling punctuation sentence structure or anything at all I find it to be enjoyable and Written by clearly a talented writer.
I thank you so much for your submission and look forward to the next one! Thank you so much and have a great and wonderful day!
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Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
