Lessons Learned and Spiritual
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Mustard Seed Sized Faith"Do good and feel good poems
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Comment from jmdg1954
Wow. Your words ring do true. I believe in God, though I don't pray as often as I should. That's because I really don't know how.
So when I read a poem like yours it truly makes me feel rejoiced.
Thank you,
John
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Wow. Your words ring do true. I believe in God, though I don't pray as often as I should. That's because I really don't know how.
So when I read a poem like yours it truly makes me feel rejoiced.
Thank you,
John
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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John, I thank you for your very sweet review and comments for my Faith poem. I appreciate it so much, my dear friend!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
and as the stars fade in the morn, it saddens me but a little while for when the day completes its chore the lights of night return in sight just as Jesus Christ will one day, and every knee shall bend and every voice give praise to the Savior of the universe.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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and as the stars fade in the morn, it saddens me but a little while for when the day completes its chore the lights of night return in sight just as Jesus Christ will one day, and every knee shall bend and every voice give praise to the Savior of the universe.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Oh Happy Day!! Right?? Tom, I thank you for your very awesome review and comments for my Faith poem.
I appreciate it so much, my dear friend!
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
A thoughtful, sincere poem which underlines the moral decline in society and in government itself. A problem which may be attributed to a decline in religious faith and observance.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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A thoughtful, sincere poem which underlines the moral decline in society and in government itself. A problem which may be attributed to a decline in religious faith and observance.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Sarah, thank you for your very sweet review and comments for my Faith poem.
I appreciate it so much, my dear friend!
Comment from Kaiku
Gosh, there are so many spiritual poems on Fan Story. I think this is the first one that mentions `mustard seeds`. It reminded me of the Princess and the Pea story in a nice way. It continues to teach us that the smallest of things can have a huge impact. Good luck in the prompt.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Gosh, there are so many spiritual poems on Fan Story. I think this is the first one that mentions `mustard seeds`. It reminded me of the Princess and the Pea story in a nice way. It continues to teach us that the smallest of things can have a huge impact. Good luck in the prompt.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Hi Kaku, I thank you so very much for your kindness for my
Faith poem and always being so thoughtful in your reviews. Your kind words are always so appreciated.
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😎👍
Comment from Ricky1024
This writing prompt Faith was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issue.
To Hanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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This writing prompt Faith was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issue.
To Hanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Thanks Ricky for your kind words for my poem. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
A powerful statement relevant and prevalent subject so much and so. Many changes in the world today leadership going down the train none of it for the good. It's hard to see anything positive you want we're dealing with today. The climate change issue is only going to get worse man continues to use up earth's resources quicker than it can be replaced. Our leadership will fall short and many of the challenges coming.
You're Writing brings home all of these things and then some it's hard to take pillar. What is going on in our world when our leadership is so poor?. Writing is both points and to the point as well and left no doubt as to its message.
I thank you for your submission. It was a very good read and meaningful poem I'll be have a good night!
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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A powerful statement relevant and prevalent subject so much and so. Many changes in the world today leadership going down the train none of it for the good. It's hard to see anything positive you want we're dealing with today. The climate change issue is only going to get worse man continues to use up earth's resources quicker than it can be replaced. Our leadership will fall short and many of the challenges coming.
You're Writing brings home all of these things and then some it's hard to take pillar. What is going on in our world when our leadership is so poor?. Writing is both points and to the point as well and left no doubt as to its message.
I thank you for your submission. It was a very good read and meaningful poem I'll be have a good night!
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Hello sweet Lea, I thank you so very much for your kindness for my Faith Poem and always being so thoughtful in your reviews. Your kind words are always so appreciated.
Comment from jacquelyn popp
Beautiful and well written poem. Your rhyming and meter in your poem flows well. I love the artwork that you used. I especially loved your line faith as small as a mustard seed. That is all it takes. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Beautiful and well written poem. Your rhyming and meter in your poem flows well. I love the artwork that you used. I especially loved your line faith as small as a mustard seed. That is all it takes. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Thanks Jacqueline for such a lovely review. And I do love that scripture how a mustard size amount of faith can move mountains if you believe. Thanks again my sweet friend!
Comment from royowen
I know who wrote this, but I'm not saying, because it's no allowed. You did a great job with this delightfully written work. A praising of the one who died for all of us, it's a mystery why anyone would not at least be interested in the creator of all the universe, well done, great job, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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I know who wrote this, but I'm not saying, because it's no allowed. You did a great job with this delightfully written work. A praising of the one who died for all of us, it's a mystery why anyone would not at least be interested in the creator of all the universe, well done, great job, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Hahaha! Oh you think so, huh? Then if you wont tell, either will I. Lol...
Thanks Roy for the great review and your always kind comments.
I do appreciate it, dear friend!
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Most welcome
