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Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Lucky Charm"A Collection Of Mini Stories
9 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have no idea what lucky charms are doing inside severed heads, but your write is nothing but inventive and horrifying Bret and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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I have no idea what lucky charms are doing inside severed heads, but your write is nothing but inventive and horrifying Bret and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Appreciate the review and your comments.
Comment from royowen
How fascinating a great abstract piece. What I liked about it was one could draw a number of conclusions, I loved the ambiguity, the 20 pieces of bone ware, and the dog, great job, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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How fascinating a great abstract piece. What I liked about it was one could draw a number of conclusions, I loved the ambiguity, the 20 pieces of bone ware, and the dog, great job, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Much appreciate the review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Ric Myworld
Sometimes, your imagination amazes me. The kind and considerate person who has a deeper, darker side, trapped in the catacombs of a brain of many experiences. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Sometimes, your imagination amazes me. The kind and considerate person who has a deeper, darker side, trapped in the catacombs of a brain of many experiences. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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So do appreciate your comments and reviews. Mean a lot.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. The image of eating Lucky Charms from a skull is not pretty. Good luck with the contest.
The next morning a Lab stood beside Tom's bed and whispered, "Lucky Charms!" (The following morning, but I'm confused by the Lab. It is a Labrador??? or exactly what??? I think this needs a little more clarity. Or maybe it's just me.)
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. The image of eating Lucky Charms from a skull is not pretty. Good luck with the contest.
The next morning a Lab stood beside Tom's bed and whispered, "Lucky Charms!" (The following morning, but I'm confused by the Lab. It is a Labrador??? or exactly what??? I think this needs a little more clarity. Or maybe it's just me.)
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Clarified to mean the breed of dog. Appreciate your question and the review.
Comment from Ulla
Oh dear, this is a harsh story and a harsh read. Your dark side of humour is really coming through here. I hope it will do well. Breakfast takes in a whole new meaning. Good luck. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Oh dear, this is a harsh story and a harsh read. Your dark side of humour is really coming through here. I hope it will do well. Breakfast takes in a whole new meaning. Good luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this little posting. Appreciate the review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Dang. That dog needs to be put down. Lol. This was one of those stories that makes you wonder what kind of mental illness Tom suffers from. Didnt the Son of Sam killer tell authorities that a dog told him to kill those people. Creepy little story you wrote there. I'll never look at lucky charms the same. Lol. Gretchen
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Dang. That dog needs to be put down. Lol. This was one of those stories that makes you wonder what kind of mental illness Tom suffers from. Didnt the Son of Sam killer tell authorities that a dog told him to kill those people. Creepy little story you wrote there. I'll never look at lucky charms the same. Lol. Gretchen
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your insights and the review. Another tale from the darker side.
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-word flash fiction story, Lucky Charm, has the proper word count and -- Gah! -- puts an odd spin on a bowl of something for breakfast. This is patched together, sentence by practically unrelated sentence, to bring Tom the Brain Eater out for breakfast. The talking dog adds to the surreal happenings. This posting makes me think one of two things, Brett. You could give a shit less about this challenge, or you are testing to see if anyone would vote for this stinker. Sorry to be harsh, but, c'mon.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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This one-hundred-word flash fiction story, Lucky Charm, has the proper word count and -- Gah! -- puts an odd spin on a bowl of something for breakfast. This is patched together, sentence by practically unrelated sentence, to bring Tom the Brain Eater out for breakfast. The talking dog adds to the surreal happenings. This posting makes me think one of two things, Brett. You could give a shit less about this challenge, or you are testing to see if anyone would vote for this stinker. Sorry to be harsh, but, c'mon.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Your comments amuse me and add a touch of humor to this dark posting. Thanks for another spectacular review. Don't give a shit? See if anyone would vote for this stinker? Interesting.
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Having read your work, Brett, I found this to be something either written in two minutes on a bet, or after you were over-served. : )
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Three, but who is counting? I do appreciate your view though. So different from all the other reviews I have received about this post. Do keep them coming.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Good morning, your flash fiction was vivid and full of action. You did a good job with it. I didn't understand the meaning of the last line. When you have time, explain it to me. I think I'm a little thick today. Have a great Sunday. Shirley
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Good morning, your flash fiction was vivid and full of action. You did a good job with it. I didn't understand the meaning of the last line. When you have time, explain it to me. I think I'm a little thick today. Have a great Sunday. Shirley
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Though Tom kills his victims, he is triggered to, and controlled, by the dog who utters the words "Lucky Charms" to hypnotize, for lack of a better phrase, Tom into action. Appreciate the review.
Comment from BethShelby
You do have a dark side. You can come up with some of the most gross horror stories. Horror stories as well as short flash fiction takes talent. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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You do have a dark side. You can come up with some of the most gross horror stories. Horror stories as well as short flash fiction takes talent. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this feeble attempt at humor. Appreciate the review.
