Untethered Kite
Adrift in the wind45 total reviews
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Jesse....and I feel your anxiety about losing someone you have come to have in your life. I hope for both your sakes she gets better soon.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Another fine poem, Jesse....and I feel your anxiety about losing someone you have come to have in your life. I hope for both your sakes she gets better soon.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Thanks, Mike. I also hope she gets better and we both stay together with love and care in our hearts. Thanks for the kind words.
Jesse
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
The human experience is so sad and wonderful all at the same time. In a few words, you were able to describe a moment in time that I am certain many of us have been through once or twice. We just have to keep moving forward.
Nicely said.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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The human experience is so sad and wonderful all at the same time. In a few words, you were able to describe a moment in time that I am certain many of us have been through once or twice. We just have to keep moving forward.
Nicely said.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Gary, for this insightful and thoughtful review! Yes, the human experience can be sad and wonderful at the same time. And you are right, we have to keep moving forward no matter what happens in our future!
Thanks for the extra stars!
Jesse
Comment from mermaids
I applaud you for writing about your caregiver. Writing is therapeutic and putting thoughts into words is a release. Excellent poem that captures feelings and emotions. I wish all the best for Cindy.
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I applaud you for writing about your caregiver. Writing is therapeutic and putting thoughts into words is a release. Excellent poem that captures feelings and emotions. I wish all the best for Cindy.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good morning, Jesse!
The imagery of an untethered kite, provided by the title of your exceptionally well-crafted poem, drew me in immediately.
Gut-wrenching to learn of your caregiver's challenges and how they impact you as well...
I, too, hope and pray that Cindy will be able to find the medical support she needs and that she will return to you whole and well.
Stay strong, Jesse!
diane
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Good morning, Jesse!
The imagery of an untethered kite, provided by the title of your exceptionally well-crafted poem, drew me in immediately.
Gut-wrenching to learn of your caregiver's challenges and how they impact you as well...
I, too, hope and pray that Cindy will be able to find the medical support she needs and that she will return to you whole and well.
Stay strong, Jesse!
diane
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Good morning to you, Diane!
I love that you were drawn to reading my post. The metaphor came to me while I was thinking about how lost I felt without her careful consideration of my well-being. Not that she doesn't care she is just unfocused thinking about her future and how it will affect both her and me.
Thanks for the wonderful extra stars!
You are a good friend and I love your support!
Jesse
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
A moving poem, obviously written from the heart. The bond between carer and those receiving care is often extremely close. A threat to this relationship is devastating as this poem shows;
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A moving poem, obviously written from the heart. The bond between carer and those receiving care is often extremely close. A threat to this relationship is devastating as this poem shows;
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
Comment from Heather Knight
Hi Jesse,
I'm really sorry to hear about Cindy.
I hope she gets better soon.
I also hope writing the poem has helped you deal with your feelings.
Thanks for sharing.
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Hi Jesse,
I'm really sorry to hear about Cindy.
I hope she gets better soon.
I also hope writing the poem has helped you deal with your feelings.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
Comment from jenintorre
I am so sorry for your situation. You are obviously going through a very traumatic time in your life. I hope by writing this poem it has helped you come to terms with things. Sending hugs. Jen.
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I am so sorry for your situation. You are obviously going through a very traumatic time in your life. I hope by writing this poem it has helped you come to terms with things. Sending hugs. Jen.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
Comment from karenina
You write your heart out here, Jesse. What a frightening diagnosis! I'm thankful it was discovered ~ If discovered before "bursting" there are amazing success stories of surgical interventions to "clip" the weakness and ballooning so as to eliminate devastating consequences. I'm sure you are both being very supportive of one another...and that, my friend, is what this life is all about!
Karenina
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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You write your heart out here, Jesse. What a frightening diagnosis! I'm thankful it was discovered ~ If discovered before "bursting" there are amazing success stories of surgical interventions to "clip" the weakness and ballooning so as to eliminate devastating consequences. I'm sure you are both being very supportive of one another...and that, my friend, is what this life is all about!
Karenina
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Yes, if anything this has brought us closer together. And as you say that is what life is all about! Thank you for sharing the different surgical interventions available to Cindy! I am sure she will appreciate hearing about them. And by the way, thanks for the extra stars!
They have really made my day!
Take good care of yourself, my friend!
Jesse
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All my best to you...and to Cindy!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fine tribute to your care giver and friend and I am sorry to hear she has had this diagnosis and I hope she can face the challenges ahead with courage Jesse. Your kind words in this poem show us how much to care for her in return, love Dolly x
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This is a fine tribute to your care giver and friend and I am sorry to hear she has had this diagnosis and I hope she can face the challenges ahead with courage Jesse. Your kind words in this poem show us how much to care for her in return, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
Comment from Wendy G
You wrote a very nice poem about your feelings. I imagine Cindy is feeling the same, perhaps multiplied by ten! No wonder she is unfocused about her future. I hope her aneurysm can be treated and that she will soon be well, for both your sakes. Best wishes to you both.
Wendy
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You wrote a very nice poem about your feelings. I imagine Cindy is feeling the same, perhaps multiplied by ten! No wonder she is unfocused about her future. I hope her aneurysm can be treated and that she will soon be well, for both your sakes. Best wishes to you both.
Wendy
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
