Untethered Kite
Adrift in the wind45 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Thanks for the notes about Cindy, Jesse.
-I am sorry she is going through this,
and it impacts on you, as well.
-I hope it is helpful writing about it.
-Your analogy in the opening verse is very good,
and shows how you are feeling adrift and unsure.
-Is she in the hospital or is the care outpatient?
-I like your verse about the "new dawn" and
hope that she is cured, as well.
-Take care and be well.
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-Thanks for the notes about Cindy, Jesse.
-I am sorry she is going through this,
and it impacts on you, as well.
-I hope it is helpful writing about it.
-Your analogy in the opening verse is very good,
and shows how you are feeling adrift and unsure.
-Is she in the hospital or is the care outpatient?
-I like your verse about the "new dawn" and
hope that she is cured, as well.
-Take care and be well.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
Comment from PoemsOfDD
I am sorry to hear about the changing current for yourself and for your caregiver. The poem you have written relays the emotional turbulence you now feel and the vulnerability at hand. I like how you have used a kite to create the scene and sense of being left to drift off into the unknown. Prayers and thank you for sharing.
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I am sorry to hear about the changing current for yourself and for your caregiver. The poem you have written relays the emotional turbulence you now feel and the vulnerability at hand. I like how you have used a kite to create the scene and sense of being left to drift off into the unknown. Prayers and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
Comment from Paul McFarland
Sometimes we just need to write a poem to help free our mind of dreadful things. You have done a good job at doing this. I have sent out a prayer for Cindy.
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Sometimes we just need to write a poem to help free our mind of dreadful things. You have done a good job at doing this. I have sent out a prayer for Cindy.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
Comment from poetwatch
We all must support those that also need us, Jesse. A friend is someone that no matter what is there for you. When I go to sleep I'll send a prayer to God above to help her in her time of need and that you as a friend help her as she helps you. Thanks for sharing.
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We all must support those that also need us, Jesse. A friend is someone that no matter what is there for you. When I go to sleep I'll send a prayer to God above to help her in her time of need and that you as a friend help her as she helps you. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
Comment from Cass Carlton
Your poem sums your feelings up very well. The image of an untethered kite blowing about willy nilly is a very good one which expresses your feelings very well. I am sorry to hear of Cindy's illness. I'll say a prayer for her tonight and ask God to heal her. You, my friend, must stay focussed.
I've read your words telling of how much Cindy means to you which is very sweet, but try to show her (if you can) how you can go on without her. Let her see that her support has improved your condition. I know you're feeling a bit lost right now without her there to guide you
but she'll be back/ Stay on course, pray for yourself and Cindy, Never under estimate the Power of Prayer. I have seen miraculous things happen through it. cheers Cass
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Your poem sums your feelings up very well. The image of an untethered kite blowing about willy nilly is a very good one which expresses your feelings very well. I am sorry to hear of Cindy's illness. I'll say a prayer for her tonight and ask God to heal her. You, my friend, must stay focussed.
I've read your words telling of how much Cindy means to you which is very sweet, but try to show her (if you can) how you can go on without her. Let her see that her support has improved your condition. I know you're feeling a bit lost right now without her there to guide you
but she'll be back/ Stay on course, pray for yourself and Cindy, Never under estimate the Power of Prayer. I have seen miraculous things happen through it. cheers Cass
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
Comment from LJbutterfly
You have experienced a year of challenges, including this latest diagnosis of your caregiver. It is amazing how strong you have remained through it all. I'm sorry to realize how this diagnosis affects both of you. However, you have expressed your sincere and heartfelt feelings in this poignant poem. Thank you for the update. My prayers are for both of you.
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You have experienced a year of challenges, including this latest diagnosis of your caregiver. It is amazing how strong you have remained through it all. I'm sorry to realize how this diagnosis affects both of you. However, you have expressed your sincere and heartfelt feelings in this poignant poem. Thank you for the update. My prayers are for both of you.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I do understand and I will pray not only for Cindy but for you. I know how it feels to be out of control
unsupported and unloved. I know it's not true, but I understand the feeling. Thank you for sharing.
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I do understand and I will pray not only for Cindy but for you. I know how it feels to be out of control
unsupported and unloved. I know it's not true, but I understand the feeling. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
Comment from Ulla
Oh, Jesse, that is a tragic turn of event. I'm so sorry this has happened to both of you. What will happen now? Will.you be allocated a new caregiver? I'm so very sorry. All best, Ulla:)))
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Oh, Jesse, that is a tragic turn of event. I'm so sorry this has happened to both of you. What will happen now? Will.you be allocated a new caregiver? I'm so very sorry. All best, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Jesse, so sorry about Cindy; hopefully, she will get better. You give your reader the same feelings of an untethered kite in your poignant and heartfelt words.
So beautifully expressed.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Jesse, so sorry about Cindy; hopefully, she will get better. You give your reader the same feelings of an untethered kite in your poignant and heartfelt words.
So beautifully expressed.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for this insightful and thoughtful review. I love your insight that I give the same feeling I have to the reader in this poem. I appreciate your kind words and caring attitude toward Cindy.
Thanks for the extra stars!
May you enjoy this week ahead!
Jesse
Comment from Terry Broxson
Jesse, sorry to hear about this, but I will hope for a good outcome. Your poem is very well written, poignant, and delivered with pathos. Excellent, Terry.
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Jesse, sorry to hear about this, but I will hope for a good outcome. Your poem is very well written, poignant, and delivered with pathos. Excellent, Terry.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
