Comment from Regina Elliott

Excellent

Hi Carlos' girl, I ran out of
6 stars the other day, which
is frustrating. I really love the
daring freedom of this fab
5-7-5 writing prompt entry.
Miss Talladega :))))))
The photo is perfect for the
poem too. All the best to you.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023

Your review is perfect with or without a six.
Thank you
Judith

Comment from Nicki Nance

Excellent

I love this small tell of a big story. You brought it all back -- family vacations, Lucky Strikes, ragtop jeeps. The photo is perfect for the poem. You developed two characters enough for the reader to make a story that;s quirky and nostalgic.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023

It is loosely based on real characters but i must maintain my anonymity! It was actually a Ford Mustang, but jeep rhymed with sleep :)

Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .

Excellent

Okay great job. I wish you well in a competition keep it up. Stay creative keep writing thanks again for sharing this peace. Hope you do well keep it up have a blessed day.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023

Thank you Eric