Dear Father
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Comment from Anne Johnston
Wendy, this is a beautiful entry for the Dear God Contest. I love how you wrote a very sincere prayer to the Lord and did it in rhyme. I especially like the lines:
"But you're the One with power, and Your love can fill an ocean
So please set my heart at rest and stop my mind's commotion."
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Wendy, this is a beautiful entry for the Dear God Contest. I love how you wrote a very sincere prayer to the Lord and did it in rhyme. I especially like the lines:
"But you're the One with power, and Your love can fill an ocean
So please set my heart at rest and stop my mind's commotion."
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Thank you Anne! What a joy to receive six stars. Many thanks and much appreciation for the encouragement.
Wendy
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You are welcome, Wendy.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a good entry for the - Dear God - contest. You have rhymed a compelling conversation to be delivered to the Lord. I particularly liked this part - It's the "me first" attitude which really is a sin!
But somehow there are attractions which deceive so many kids,
So true and so disappointing that the tantrums and expectations start so young because the mindless parents do not know how to spend true time with their children unless they put an electronic device in their hands to occupy them. Don't get me started... Thank you for sharing your thoughts and best of luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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This is a good entry for the - Dear God - contest. You have rhymed a compelling conversation to be delivered to the Lord. I particularly liked this part - It's the "me first" attitude which really is a sin!
But somehow there are attractions which deceive so many kids,
So true and so disappointing that the tantrums and expectations start so young because the mindless parents do not know how to spend true time with their children unless they put an electronic device in their hands to occupy them. Don't get me started... Thank you for sharing your thoughts and best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much. I am very glad you enjoyed it.
Now, there is a Rant contest, which might just suit what you are saying in the second part of your response. Lol. Thanks again.
Wendy
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Yes, there is isn't there. Hmm, an interesting thought but then again I will get all worked up and then have to promote the piece to hear more worked up comments on the subject. There is so much to rant about these days. I read something yesterday that sickened me about grossly bad parenting. And yet, the parents do not think they are doing anything wrong. They are beyond bogans! See, you got me started again...
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I understand. I entered a rant about cruelty to animals. You have to write "now I feel better" at the end, but I didn't and you are right. The reviews are upsetting because people give further examples, and it seems so widespread that animals aren't well treated. Even rereading my own piece to check it made me feel upset again.
W
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I like this heartfelt poem, and I can put an Amen on each verse. God is the all-powerful One, the only One who can solve the problems in our world. I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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I like this heartfelt poem, and I can put an Amen on each verse. God is the all-powerful One, the only One who can solve the problems in our world. I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much Verna, I am so glad you enjoyed this one. Thanks too for the good wishes.
Wendy
Comment from kahpot
"me first" attitude is so very correct, so many in high positions have this downfall, I really like the way you consider others in your letter, and don't squarely place blame on individuals, it is groups of greed that belittle the majority, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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"me first" attitude is so very correct, so many in high positions have this downfall, I really like the way you consider others in your letter, and don't squarely place blame on individuals, it is groups of greed that belittle the majority, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much Kahpot, for your thoughtful response. Thanks also for your good wishes. All are appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from Paul McFarland
Good job, Wendy. You have a very important message here. Your meter needs a little work, but the message overshadows it. It looks like we will be competitors in this contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Good job, Wendy. You have a very important message here. Your meter needs a little work, but the message overshadows it. It looks like we will be competitors in this contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
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Ah - my old friend "metre". I rewrote it as "poetic prose" to avoid that issue and as the contest put it it in the prose type section and posted that initially, but then I put it back into "poetry" as I felt that poetic prose was neither one thing nor the other. Lol. Thanks so much for reviewing, and yes, I'll take another look at it.
Wendy
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If it came from the heart, it doesn't need another look.
Comment from lyenochka
Amen! Agree with your prayer and of course, our greatest concern is the eternal state of all, especially of our relatives, friends, and neighbors. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Amen! Agree with your prayer and of course, our greatest concern is the eternal state of all, especially of our relatives, friends, and neighbors. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thank you Helen. Lovely review.
We all have loved ones we are yearning to see coming into his kingdom. That is his will, and we know he hears!
Wendy
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Comment from royowen
Oh yes, if we didn't have God give us this world to steward, and even though we are destroying it, taking it away suddenly, that wouldn't be keeping His word. We can't have our cake and eat it as well, I partner with you in your written petition Wendy, in Jesus' name. Well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Oh yes, if we didn't have God give us this world to steward, and even though we are destroying it, taking it away suddenly, that wouldn't be keeping His word. We can't have our cake and eat it as well, I partner with you in your written petition Wendy, in Jesus' name. Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thank you Roy, a lovely review. Appreciated.
Wendy
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Most welcome
Comment from damommy
Beautifully worded. I know He hears this prayer along with everyone's. We must hold on because I know He will step in when the time is right. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Beautifully worded. I know He hears this prayer along with everyone's. We must hold on because I know He will step in when the time is right. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much! I appreciate your lovely review. Glad you enjoyed it.
Wendy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
As a society we have moved so far away from God. I don't understand why. I guess Satan has become more powerful and people are being fooled my him. I know God wants a relationship with us. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you the best of luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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As a society we have moved so far away from God. I don't understand why. I guess Satan has become more powerful and people are being fooled my him. I know God wants a relationship with us. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you the best of luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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I believe we are rapidly moving towards end times, with much deception. Thank you for a lovely review and for your good wishes.
Wendy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine letter Wendy and I hope all your prayers are answered. Your words are faithful and honourable and your belief is real and honest, I enjoyed this post for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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A fine letter Wendy and I hope all your prayers are answered. Your words are faithful and honourable and your belief is real and honest, I enjoyed this post for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thank you Dolly. I think God delights to answer prayers for others and their spiritual well-being. I know he hears, and I know he loves us. For me that is enough; I guess I trust him to do what is right and best. Thank you too for your good wishes.
Wendy
