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Comment from Sumaira.24
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Really nice poem. I really enjoyed reading this. Lots of interesting twists and turns and some humour in it too. An enjoyable read and well written poem. Thanks for writing it.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2023
    Sumaira, I thank you so very much for such a kind review and comments for this poem for Pam. I know she also appreciates it.
    Thank you again, my friend.
Comment from F.E. Tate
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Debi, I usually don't read poetry. However, yours was interesting and easy to understand. I love that you shared you friendship with us. I enjoyed the rhythm and how everything flowed. Great job.
Felecia

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
    Hi Felicia! You are so incredibly sweet! Thank you so much for your lovely review and words for my story of saving Bridget! And also for the 'gift' of six stars!! You are so very kind, my friend!
Comment from Janet Foor
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A lovely tribute to your friend Pam and happy birthday to you both. Stormy times of life, we all must take a break and care for ourselves.

Well done Debi

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2023
    Hi Janet, I thank you so very much for such a kind review and comments for this poem for Pam. I know she also appreciates it.
    Thank you again, my dear friend.
Comment from patcelaw
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What a beautiful tribute poem to your good friend Pam. I am not aware of who Pam is, but she sounds like one terrific lady. I think it's cool that you both share the same birthday. And I also see that Dr. Nad Has joined in the grouping of the three of you now. I wish you the very best in all of your writing. Patricia.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2023
    Hi Pat. I thank you so very much for such a kind review and comments for this poem for Pam. I know she also appreciates it.
    Thank you again, my dear friend.
Comment from Aussie
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We all take a break sometimes for whatever reason. You were lucky to have that time with her. I have not come across her. Now you have another friend, Dr Nad and there must be more out there with the same birthdays?
I'm a Sept baby. Born when the war ended. K xx

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
    HiAussie, Pam will still be around here and there to review but not writing.
    You say your birthday is Sept. could you give me the date? I checked and we don't have it. Thanks for your lovely comments for her poem, my sweet friend
reply by Aussie on 03-Mar-2023
    17 September 1945 just an old bat now.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
    I was close. I guessed your birthday to be Sept 18. That is my husbands and dads.
    And girl, you are far from old. Especially with you4 sense of humor, you may be one of those who will still be spry at 100. Thanks for letting me know!
reply by Aussie on 04-Mar-2023
    A palm reader once told me I would live to a grand old age. Yuk!
reply by Aussie on 04-Mar-2023
    Your six sense was close! Virgos are very cluey folks. Have tummy problems and make good nurses. I loved nursing.
Comment from Anne Johnston
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This is a great birthday tribute to Pam. Sorry I missed her birthday, and yours as well. I hope you both had a wonderful day. I am trying to get caught up today.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2023
    Hi Anne, I thank you so very much for such a kind review and comments for this poem for Pam. I know she also appreciates it.
    Thank you again, my dear friend.
reply by Anne Johnston on 07-Mar-2023
    You are welcome, Debi
Comment from evilynne
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Such a nice tribute to your friend and fellow writer. How great that you share a birthday! I hope her husband's health improves in the near future. Evi

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
    Evi, I thank you so much for your lovely review and words for my poem for Pam! I truly appreciated your gift of six stars. You are so very kind, my dear friend!
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Debi.
-Your notes are appreciate.
-A very nice tribute to Pam and Dr. Nad, too!
-You give many good examples of what you have in common,
especially sharing the same birthday.
-I am sorry to hear that her husband has some health issues.
-Thoughts are with her and her family.
-Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2023
    Pam, I really appreciated you bringing to my attention that I had not really specified what Pam I was referring to in this. I really don't know Nad very well at all, but the day I was writing this he must have seen my birthdate and jokingly made a comment on one of my reviews from him, that I was so much older than him, yet he understood what I had written about. That is when he told me about him being 6 days behind me. So I told him about Pam's and my discovery and jokingly said, I guess we're triplets then. I think it made him feel so good, I just kept it going, I figured our writing should always make us feel good, build up others and have fun. At least I try with all my heart to do that, and so thankful for your friendship. I thank you so very much for such a kind review and comments for this poem for Pam. I know she also appreciates it.
    Thank you again, my dear friend.
reply by Pam (respa) on 04-Mar-2023
    You are very welcome, Debi,and thanks for sharing in your reply. I agree that we should be positive and kind. I appreciate your friendship, as well.
Comment from dragonpoet
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This is a well done ode to Pam. It is interesting that you have the same birthday. I hope her husband has a full recovery and that she learns a lot.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2023
    Joan, I thank you so very much for such a kind review and comments for this poem for Pam. I know she also appreciates it.
    Thank you again, my dear friend.
reply by dragonpoet on 05-Mar-2023
    You are most kindly welcome, Debi.
    Joan
Comment from GWHARGIS
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That is very cool that you both share a birthday. I think I just recently discovered her. My time on Fanstory is limited due to my job but I love to discover new writers. I'm glad she isn't going cold turkey on us. And also look forward to reading Dr. Nad. Great poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2023
    Hi Gretchen, I just came back from voting for you dear friend. Hope you win!
    I thank you so very much for such a kind review and comments for this poem for Pam. I know she also appreciates it.
    Thank you again, my dear friend.