Guided by Faith
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Comment from Douglas Goff
This is starting out strong. I faned you so I can follow throughout. I found myself wondering what the Chief's house looked like.
Good strong characters. I think you are off to a good start, my friend!
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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This is starting out strong. I faned you so I can follow throughout. I found myself wondering what the Chief's house looked like.
Good strong characters. I think you are off to a good start, my friend!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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We'll get glimpses of his house throughout, but it's not a big deal. Thank you for the kind review.
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Every single(not married) cop's house I have ever been in has been sparse and gloomy. I have no idea why. priorities maybe?
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I do understand. My boys, before marriage, apartments were the same.
Comment from eliz100
This is an excellent chapter to start your book. The dance in the coffee shop was quite entertaining. I look forward to the next chapter. I don't see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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This is an excellent chapter to start your book. The dance in the coffee shop was quite entertaining. I look forward to the next chapter. I don't see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Paul McFarland
I'm going to stick with your novel for awhile, Barb, and see how it goes. The first chapter has set things up nicely. The characters are interesting. Character flaws might add something to the story.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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I'm going to stick with your novel for awhile, Barb, and see how it goes. The first chapter has set things up nicely. The characters are interesting. Character flaws might add something to the story.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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I'm positive character flaw will add to the story. They both have them. Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Teri7
Barbara, I am so excited to be able to read some of your work. This is a great prologue. I love the picture of the girl. You used great descriptive words and great dialogue. I look forward to reading more of your work. This was a six star post to me. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Barbara, I am so excited to be able to read some of your work. This is a great prologue. I love the picture of the girl. You used great descriptive words and great dialogue. I look forward to reading more of your work. This was a six star post to me. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from jmdg1954
This is good, since in your last novel I came in on the middle of it. Here I'm at page one and can be fully engaged.
So far I feel you've done well to introduce a few characters. I'm sure more are coming.
I look forward to more of your faith based novel.
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Thanks. John
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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This is good, since in your last novel I came in on the middle of it. Here I'm at page one and can be fully engaged.
So far I feel you've done well to introduce a few characters. I'm sure more are coming.
I look forward to more of your faith based novel.
This post did not show up in my messages as a notification. Would you know any reason?
Thanks. John
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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I have no clue why that's happening. A few of the people I follow I'm not always getting their posts either. I have a feeling there's something wrong with the system. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Wendy G
No suggestions, but I assume Seth is young and single .... Looking forward to seeing how this develops - I like a good romance. Just wondering: the dancing seems to be concurrent with the place open as a bakery and coffee shop, so they might have to organise who serves coffe etc and who organises the dancing, otherwise people like Seth might not hang around waiting. Always good to have a couple of dogs in a story too. Well done. Enjoyable read.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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No suggestions, but I assume Seth is young and single .... Looking forward to seeing how this develops - I like a good romance. Just wondering: the dancing seems to be concurrent with the place open as a bakery and coffee shop, so they might have to organise who serves coffe etc and who organises the dancing, otherwise people like Seth might not hang around waiting. Always good to have a couple of dogs in a story too. Well done. Enjoyable read.
Wendy
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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The dance was only for Ms. Sadie but does happen once in a while. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I think your novels are very romantic with some of life's problems added in, which is very romantic to me. There is nothing romantic about two women fighting over one man and being bitchy. I really like the beginning of this one and look forward to more. Very interesting characters.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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I think your novels are very romantic with some of life's problems added in, which is very romantic to me. There is nothing romantic about two women fighting over one man and being bitchy. I really like the beginning of this one and look forward to more. Very interesting characters.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. I have a feeling the person who does the main complaining feels unless there's sex there's romance. I doubt that person understands true love.
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You are probably right. I don't enjoy modern romances because they are all about the sex.
Comment from Jay Squires
Seth followed behind. "Who's Molly?" [I'm wondering here about Emma wearing her night shirt. I'm thinking that might be revealing, though you didn't mention that. At any rate, should you deal with that issue now, since you have Seth examining her foot and that can be quite revealing. Just a suggestion, but I wonder if other readers have thought the same.]
Seth knelt in front of her, stood, grabbed a throw blanket, and then covered her legs. [OKAY! lol, I'm always a day early with my observations!]
This is a fine introduction to the characters. I'm used to that with you!
Jay
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Seth followed behind. "Who's Molly?" [I'm wondering here about Emma wearing her night shirt. I'm thinking that might be revealing, though you didn't mention that. At any rate, should you deal with that issue now, since you have Seth examining her foot and that can be quite revealing. Just a suggestion, but I wonder if other readers have thought the same.]
Seth knelt in front of her, stood, grabbed a throw blanket, and then covered her legs. [OKAY! lol, I'm always a day early with my observations!]
This is a fine introduction to the characters. I'm used to that with you!
Jay
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Molly is her Pomeranian. I answered that question when Seth asked. Also there will be more about this night shirt later. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sankey
So pleased to see yes another novel coming from your clever head! As I have stated, many times, you never disappoint your faithful readers. One change to the comment about "Emma's" picture...what Emma may look [it.](like.)
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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So pleased to see yes another novel coming from your clever head! As I have stated, many times, you never disappoint your faithful readers. One change to the comment about "Emma's" picture...what Emma may look [it.](like.)
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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I have made that correction. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
I glad you've started you new story. I this one promises to be fun to read. I sure this red head will liven up the town. The cop seems very serious about doing what he is hired to do and keeping the town safe. I can't wait to see where this story goes. I enjoyed the line dance too.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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I glad you've started you new story. I this one promises to be fun to read. I sure this red head will liven up the town. The cop seems very serious about doing what he is hired to do and keeping the town safe. I can't wait to see where this story goes. I enjoyed the line dance too.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
