I Wish
Venting out emotions after a break up.2 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
Congratulations on your milestone post. I read every last word, and all I can say is that your words were raw and they made me feel for you. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Congratulations on your milestone post. I read every last word, and all I can say is that your words were raw and they made me feel for you. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. This poem was written about 4 years ago during a rough break up. We all go through it thank you for your sympathy. Writing it out helped me cope with the pain. Thank you for enjoying my work.
Comment from Kaiku
5 stars for your determination. A milestone for your 50th post. I haven`t been reading much lately. I am trying to figure out your style. It reminds me of another soul dealing with the challenges of life and past hurts. Quite honestly, I believe your work could be better appreciated if it were formed with a bit more structure, meaning, there are either stanzas or some level of pause within thoughts so that one isn`t trying to just keep up with the verbage. Don`t be offended but your work is like a tsunami. It`s all at once. Too much to take in.
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5 stars for your determination. A milestone for your 50th post. I haven`t been reading much lately. I am trying to figure out your style. It reminds me of another soul dealing with the challenges of life and past hurts. Quite honestly, I believe your work could be better appreciated if it were formed with a bit more structure, meaning, there are either stanzas or some level of pause within thoughts so that one isn`t trying to just keep up with the verbage. Don`t be offended but your work is like a tsunami. It`s all at once. Too much to take in.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
