Dribbles And Drabbles
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Birthday Bash"A Collection Of Mini Stories
27 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
A sad story. We don't know why the boy didn't make it to his Ferris Wheel ride, but the loss of such a young life is tragic. He was looking forward to life and couldn't wait until he was big enough to ride the roller coaster. Very poignant picture of the mother as she is now without her son. She is there to keep her memory of him. Best of luck in the contest. Great story in such a few words. judi
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
  |
A sad story. We don't know why the boy didn't make it to his Ferris Wheel ride, but the loss of such a young life is tragic. He was looking forward to life and couldn't wait until he was big enough to ride the roller coaster. Very poignant picture of the mother as she is now without her son. She is there to keep her memory of him. Best of luck in the contest. Great story in such a few words. judi
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
-
Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate your insights and the review.
-
You're welcome. Great story. judi
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Drabble? To complement your drabble?
Hardly drabble. Short, maybe. But surely not drabble.
I don't know how I could properly review drabble.
Liable to get drabble all over me, should I endeavor to try.
Drabble indeed!
Best wishes
(smiley face here)
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
|
Drabble? To complement your drabble?
Hardly drabble. Short, maybe. But surely not drabble.
I don't know how I could properly review drabble.
Liable to get drabble all over me, should I endeavor to try.
Drabble indeed!
Best wishes
(smiley face here)
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
-
Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Ulla
Oh, dear, I never saw this coming. Sean so wanted to be big enough to go it alone, and when he finally did it catapulted him into eternity.bwhat an entry! Good luck with this great but tragic story, Brett. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
|
Oh, dear, I never saw this coming. Sean so wanted to be big enough to go it alone, and when he finally did it catapulted him into eternity.bwhat an entry! Good luck with this great but tragic story, Brett. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
-
Appreciate your insights and the review.
Comment from jessizero
This piece of flash fiction was so lovely and sad. I was sorry that his ride to the sky was his last. You told a complete and compelling story in just a few words.
Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
|
This piece of flash fiction was so lovely and sad. I was sorry that his ride to the sky was his last. You told a complete and compelling story in just a few words.
Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
-
Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Mintybee
You told a good story in a very short space. The details were great. I liked "cotton-candy stickiness" and "Ashes sifted through her tear-covered fingers." It's a nice echo there.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
|
You told a good story in a very short space. The details were great. I liked "cotton-candy stickiness" and "Ashes sifted through her tear-covered fingers." It's a nice echo there.
Mintybee
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
-
Appreciate the review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness this is a sad write and we never know when the show is over and we must enjoy every moment whilst we have life and not put off those things we yearn to do, a poignant write, love Dolly x
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
|
Oh my goodness this is a sad write and we never know when the show is over and we must enjoy every moment whilst we have life and not put off those things we yearn to do, a poignant write, love Dolly x
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
-
Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This contest entry brought tears to my eyes. I'm positive the mom heard Sean's laugh of glee. I can't imagine any different. I know it's fiction, but I still need closure. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. It's very well written and filled with emotion. Good luck with the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
|
This contest entry brought tears to my eyes. I'm positive the mom heard Sean's laugh of glee. I can't imagine any different. I know it's fiction, but I still need closure. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. It's very well written and filled with emotion. Good luck with the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
-
Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate your insights and the review.
