Jest Her?
Hmm...maybe not, fellas18 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
What's vendetterism? I looked and couldn't find it. It sounds French. I would add the meaning to your author notes.
Your funny as fuck girl sounds like fun but your wife would not be happy, or she may.
It's an interesting poem and humorous, who doesn't need more laughs in our lives. Well done, closet poet. :)
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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What's vendetterism? I looked and couldn't find it. It sounds French. I would add the meaning to your author notes.
Your funny as fuck girl sounds like fun but your wife would not be happy, or she may.
It's an interesting poem and humorous, who doesn't need more laughs in our lives. Well done, closet poet. :)
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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LOL thanks Gypsy
I made up that word and I don't even think I spelled it right.
As for the wife being not happy, I did stretch the bounds of poetic licence for good measure.
Thanks for stopping by and yes I agree we all need more laughs in our lives and none more than right now.
Cheers
CPJ
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed this Limerick-style poem full of innuendo and humour and I am glad you are back, I always love your poems.
The first line did not make sense to me:
Are you're hot for The Jester?
Did you mean (Are (you) hot for the Jester?)
Good luck,
Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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I enjoyed this Limerick-style poem full of innuendo and humour and I am glad you are back, I always love your poems.
The first line did not make sense to me:
Are you're hot for The Jester?
Did you mean (Are (you) hot for the Jester?)
Good luck,
Love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Ooh my goodness Dolly, hi and thanks so much for catching that spag in the first line.
I must be slipping lol...it's been awhile between poetic drinks haha
Cheers
P
Comment from Thesis
Welcome Back!!! I missed your writing. I was away for a while too, but I'm looking forward to again read your work. Hope all is well Down Under, and that you escaped unscathed from the pandemic. Cheers!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Welcome Back!!! I missed your writing. I was away for a while too, but I'm looking forward to again read your work. Hope all is well Down Under, and that you escaped unscathed from the pandemic. Cheers!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Aww John, thanks so much. I remember you were one of the first to review me when I came here way back in 2010. Good to know you are still around and I look forward to reading you also. Didn't escape the covid at Xmas time unfortunately but all good now :)
Hope you are well, thanks for stopping by
Cheers
P
Comment from kiwisteveh
Wow! Where you bin, stranger!? long time between drinks.
i remember to verbal gymnastics and the not so subtle innuendo with the combination of the two making me snort my coffee most inelegantly.
What I don't remember are the spaggy errors...
Are you're hot --> Are you hot
and a couple of your/you're errors in that last verse.
Welcome back. I'm sure there's a story in the absence. I look forward to reading more of your wit, even if it's blunt as a truck, because it's always funny as fuck.
Steve
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Wow! Where you bin, stranger!? long time between drinks.
i remember to verbal gymnastics and the not so subtle innuendo with the combination of the two making me snort my coffee most inelegantly.
What I don't remember are the spaggy errors...
Are you're hot --> Are you hot
and a couple of your/you're errors in that last verse.
Welcome back. I'm sure there's a story in the absence. I look forward to reading more of your wit, even if it's blunt as a truck, because it's always funny as fuck.
Steve
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Lol hey Steve, thanks for stopping by. Yes you can tell it's been a while with all those damn spags.
And yep, I got lots to say...as per usual.
I've been away for such a long time and have sooooo much to write about again.
Your review was a treat. Thanks so much for stopping by. Good to know there are still a few delightful people here that I remember. I look forward to catching up on your work.
Cheers
P
Comment from royowen
I met girls like that when I was young, you'd never marry them, they'd make a mess of you, and then they'd clear off without a backward, although I thought I was tough...I wasn't! Well done, good job, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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I met girls like that when I was young, you'd never marry them, they'd make a mess of you, and then they'd clear off without a backward, although I thought I was tough...I wasn't! Well done, good job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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LOL Roy
I wrote this ages ago but it probably still applies to me as nothings changed. Still vocal, still a potty mouth and still pretty loud about it. With that said, I did ham it up a bit lol
Thanks for stopping by, I appreciate your thoughtful review.
Cheers
P
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Most welcome
Comment from Brandon Clark
Intriguing poem. Your rhyming, flow and pace were all done well. Favorite lines were:
"If you're clearly besotted
And hers till you've rotted"
-just thought they were witty without losing "meaning"
You kept my attention throughout with the rhymes and interesting quips. Thanks for posting,
Brandon
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Intriguing poem. Your rhyming, flow and pace were all done well. Favorite lines were:
"If you're clearly besotted
And hers till you've rotted"
-just thought they were witty without losing "meaning"
You kept my attention throughout with the rhymes and interesting quips. Thanks for posting,
Brandon
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Thank you Brandon, I appreciate your thorough review.
Cheers
CPJ
Comment from Douglas Goff
Goodness gracious, you are a creative sort. I could not help but mentally picture a man in a jester costume stating this loudly and clearly as he pranced about.
It is very well-written and nicely laid out.
Thanks for sharing!
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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Goodness gracious, you are a creative sort. I could not help but mentally picture a man in a jester costume stating this loudly and clearly as he pranced about.
It is very well-written and nicely laid out.
Thanks for sharing!
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Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Lol well I look like a woman but talk like a man if that makes any sense. This was written awhile back when I had a bit more sass haha
Just warning the newbies what they're in for on my return to fs lol
Thanks for stopping by
Much appreciated
Cheers
CPJ
Comment from Ricky1024
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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I'm within this skin but I don't think I could ever win.
Not that she's too much for me!
Cuz, Clowns love Jesters.
And I love to watch the Adams family's Fester!
Perhaps this will be a lesson or the tester?
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Been there done that had my Heart Broken and stolen.
It's taking the toll in...
More on that later...
Thanks and welcome back to my house.
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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
I'm within this skin but I don't think I could ever win.
Not that she's too much for me!
Cuz, Clowns love Jesters.
And I love to watch the Adams family's Fester!
Perhaps this will be a lesson or the tester?
...
Been there done that had my Heart Broken and stolen.
It's taking the toll in...
More on that later...
Thanks and welcome back to my house.
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Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Hey Ricky
Thanks for stopping by with your bubbly review.
Much appreciated
Cheers
CPJ
