Comment from jacquelyn popp

Excellent

Good poem. Well written. Your meter, and rhyming flows well. This is nicely written, and a good choice of your photo, that went well with your poem. You did a good job with writing prompt entry. Nicely done. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023

Hi Jacquelyn, you are so sweet. Thank you for the kind words for my Hey Jude poem. It is so appreciated, my friend.

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

Kids can be so mean :-( I enjoyed this entry for the - Even the Odds - contest. It has two good first and last words - rude and crude - that match well. The story within is inspiring... beat negative behaviour with kindness and the presentation fitting. Well done and best of luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023

You are so sweet!. Thank you for the kind words for my Hey Jude poem. It is so appreciated, my friend.

reply by PoemsOfDD on 24-Feb-2023

All my pleasure :-) xx

Comment from ESOSTINE

Excellent

I can identify with this poem, how our attitudes towards others (who may be less informed) can change their perception of us. Well penned. Thanks for sharing your inspiration, and good luck in the contest. Lol.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023

Hi Esostine, you are so kind. Thank you for the thoughtful words for my Hey Jude poem. It is so appreciated, my friend.

Comment from Lea Tonin1

Excellent

Well this one's quite good! You got some rhyming going on in there too!
Pretty tough with this type of poem and a story line with a moral! Great work.
Very impressive and a wonderful Storyline designed to teach us something great!

Thank you so much for your submission good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023

Hi Lea, you are so kind. Thank you for the kind words for my Hey Jude poem. It is so appreciated, my friend.

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

The picture was a perfect choice. I liked this poem and the unique style in which it was written. The rhyming made me think it would be perfect for children. Very well written. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for posting. Gretchen

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 Comment Written 23-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023

Hi Gretchen, you are so kind. Thank you for the thoughtfus words for my Hey Jude poem. It is so appreciated, my friend.

Comment from Mintybee

Excellent

Your syllable count is correct. Your synonyms at the beginning and end are correct. This is the first Even the Odds entry I've seen with rhyme, which you made work well to keep the poem flowing.
Mintybee

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 Comment Written 23-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023

Hi Minty, you are so kind. Thank you for tful oughtful words for my Hey Jude poem. It is so appreciated, my friend.