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Enjoy the beauty around us.51 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is such a beautiful scene this poem had me seeing in my minds eye. I could sit there for hours and just relax and enjoy God's amazing beauty. You used great descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing! Blessings, Teri
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This is such a beautiful scene this poem had me seeing in my minds eye. I could sit there for hours and just relax and enjoy God's amazing beauty. You used great descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Yes, I have seen this, and I do understand who beautiful and peace that area is. I wish I was there right now. Thank you for the memory.
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Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Yes, I have seen this, and I do understand who beautiful and peace that area is. I wish I was there right now. Thank you for the memory.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
Comment from jmdg1954
Wow. This poem told the story of the beauty of natures, sounds and color. The sun, flowers, running water, all left a vivid picture in my mind as I'm writing this.
Great cadence and rhymes.
Cheers to natures beauty.
John
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Wow. This poem told the story of the beauty of natures, sounds and color. The sun, flowers, running water, all left a vivid picture in my mind as I'm writing this.
Great cadence and rhymes.
Cheers to natures beauty.
John
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I think I'd be sitting there all the time if it was near me. It sound idyllic. A nice place to sit a ponder and, perhaps, write? Beautiful poem, Willie, and love the picture. Well done! :) Sandra xx
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I think I'd be sitting there all the time if it was near me. It sound idyllic. A nice place to sit a ponder and, perhaps, write? Beautiful poem, Willie, and love the picture. Well done! :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
Comment from jacquelyn popp
I enjoyed reading your poem. The illustration that you used is absolutely beautiful and goes very nicely with your poem. Your poem paints a beautiful picture of where you grew up. I enjoyed reading your poem about the beauty of spring. I also love birds in the morning, and your poem created lovely scenes. Thank you for sharing.
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I enjoyed reading your poem. The illustration that you used is absolutely beautiful and goes very nicely with your poem. Your poem paints a beautiful picture of where you grew up. I enjoyed reading your poem about the beauty of spring. I also love birds in the morning, and your poem created lovely scenes. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
Comment from Terry Broxson
Willie, you do paint a beautiful picture of where you grew up. The photo you chose illustrates the poem nicely. Unfortunately, I grew up in a city in the oil patch of West Texas. It was a day's drive to a place that had a river or stream. Excellent work. Terry.
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Willie, you do paint a beautiful picture of where you grew up. The photo you chose illustrates the poem nicely. Unfortunately, I grew up in a city in the oil patch of West Texas. It was a day's drive to a place that had a river or stream. Excellent work. Terry.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
Comment from John Ciarmello
Gorgeous, Willie! It is so nice to read about the beauty of spring, and you have done it so well here. The photo is stunning, and it gives me great anticipation for spring! Best, JohnC
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Gorgeous, Willie! It is so nice to read about the beauty of spring, and you have done it so well here. The photo is stunning, and it gives me great anticipation for spring! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
Comment from Jim Wile
I enjoyed this poem of a very serene scene. I can understand why you spent a lot of time there. You made me wish I was there!
I'm not sure why the second-to-last couplet has a question mark, though. It seems more like a statement than a question. Regardless, you painted a beautiful scene. Jim
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I enjoyed this poem of a very serene scene. I can understand why you spent a lot of time there. You made me wish I was there!
I'm not sure why the second-to-last couplet has a question mark, though. It seems more like a statement than a question. Regardless, you painted a beautiful scene. Jim
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Willie,
This poem of rhyming couplets is a good push to get us to appreciate the beauty around us in all seasons. We often take the beauty for granted and don't really appreciate it. Sitting in a field of flowers sounds good right now while we are under much snow and are getting more today and tomorrow.
The repetition of the questions is a good method to get the point across.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
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Hi Willie,
This poem of rhyming couplets is a good push to get us to appreciate the beauty around us in all seasons. We often take the beauty for granted and don't really appreciate it. Sitting in a field of flowers sounds good right now while we are under much snow and are getting more today and tomorrow.
The repetition of the questions is a good method to get the point across.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Willie
Yes I can see all this I love the birds in the morning and found your poem created lovely scenes to enjoy We just need to take the time to appreciate the simple pleasure Nature offers us
Cheers Chris
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Hi Willie
Yes I can see all this I love the birds in the morning and found your poem created lovely scenes to enjoy We just need to take the time to appreciate the simple pleasure Nature offers us
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 09-Mar-2023
