Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55

Excellent

I loved your theme about an amazing, unselfish man. If only there were more people in the world like him. Very well written.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023

Hi there ! Thanks so much for the kind words for my A B C D E poem. It was fun adding the challenge of monorhyme, and add the last word too, as well as the first, with the consecutive letter, and still make the story make sense. Thanks again for your kind comments!

Comment from John Ciarmello

Excellent

I wish I had another star for this! What a beautiful write about a selfless man who worked hard for his millions and gave it all to needy children. I enjoyed the way it read and the wonderful meaning behind it! Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023

Hi there John! Thanks so much for the kind words for my A . B C D E poem. It was fun adding the challenge of monorhyme, and add the last word too with the consecutive letter, and still make the story make sense.I hope everyone caught that! Thanks again for your kind comments!.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and good presentation.
-You wrote a very good poem with a good topic.
-Good descriptive detail and rhyme that tells a story.
-It sounds like Bob was a very caring man who
wanted life to be better for those who didn't have as much.
-Once in a while someone like him comes along,
and it makes a difference in people's lives and
gives hope to everyone for a better world.
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023

Hi there Pam. Thanks so much for the kind words for my A . B C D E poem. It was fun adding the challenge of monorhyme, and add the last word too with the consecutive letter, as well as beginning and still make the story make sense. Thanks again for your kind comments!

reply by Pam (respa) on 18-Feb-2023

You are very welcome, and it was a lot to accomplish, but you did a great job. I appreciate your reply.

Comment from Sarah Das Gupta

Excellent

Congratulations on your clever use of the alphabetical pattern at the END
as the beginning of the lines! The picture is brilliant! If only more people did this!

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023

Hi there Sarah Thanks so much for the kind words for my A . B C D E poem. It was fun adding the challenge of monorhyme, and add the last word too with the consecutive letter, as well as beginning and still make the story make sense. Thanks again for your kind comments!

reply by Sarah Das Gupta on 18-Feb-2023

Best wishes from Cambridge, UK

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

That is a clever ABC as you have doubled the deal, with ABCDE at the ends of the lines as well. Well done. You've told a maningful story, and also made a mono-rhyme. Great effort. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023

.Thanks so very much Wendy. I think you were among very few that even realized it was an abc poem. So I truly appreciate that you did. Thanks again, my sweet friend..

reply by Wendy G on 18-Feb-2023

That means that your poem was very smooth and flowed well, and told a story.
(Many ABC poems seem to be just collections of words beginning with the required letters.)

Comment from jacquelyn popp

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem about this caring person. Your poem was well written and flows nicely. The rhyming pattern was good throughout your poem. Nice artwork to go with your poem. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023

Hi there Jacquelyn! Thanks so much for the kind words for my A . B C D E poem. It was fun adding the challenge of monorhyme, and add the last word too with the consecutive letter, as well as beginning and still make the story make sense. Thanks again for your kind comments!

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

Bob sounds like a wonderful person. Is he real? Did he do all those thoughtful things? The world needs more people like Bob. Your mono-rhyme poem tells of Bob's activities in an interesting way.

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 Comment Written 18-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023

Hi there Lisa May. Thanks so much for the kind words for my A . B C D E poem. It was fun adding the challenge of monorhyme, and add the last word too with the consecutive letter, as well as beginning and still make the story make sense. Thanks again for your kind comments!

Comment from Kaiku

Excellent

Silly as this may seem
This was well worth the time
Under my lamp with underscores
Valued your words as a visitor
What an entry it`s wonderful

Best of luck in the ABC`s of writing.


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 Comment Written 18-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023

Thanks so very much Kaiku! I think you were among very few that even realized it was an abc poem. So I truly appreciate that you got the letter at the end of lines as well . Thanks again, my kind friend.