I'm Doing Well
A Paradelle Poem31 total reviews
Comment from susand3022
Hi Damommy!
Well, that just answered the question I just asked Jan about whether or not you can mix up the words. You definitely can! You definitely did!
I found it a very creative way to use your words. Great job with this form!
Susan :)
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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Hi Damommy!
Well, that just answered the question I just asked Jan about whether or not you can mix up the words. You definitely can! You definitely did!
I found it a very creative way to use your words. Great job with this form!
Susan :)
Comment Written 18-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Mintybee
A really well done example of this form. It's very readable, and makes good use of the words you chose. It was a cozy poem, and I enjoyed reading it.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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A really well done example of this form. It's very readable, and makes good use of the words you chose. It was a cozy poem, and I enjoyed reading it.
Mintybee
Comment Written 18-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for this!
Comment from Kaiku
you certainly taught me well
you certainly taught me well
the sequence of my words fell
the sequence of my words fell
my words of the sequence fell
certainly well you taught me
Ha, you educated me I think.
I think you educated me, Ha.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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you certainly taught me well
you certainly taught me well
the sequence of my words fell
the sequence of my words fell
my words of the sequence fell
certainly well you taught me
Ha, you educated me I think.
I think you educated me, Ha.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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You did this so well. Thanks for reviewing.
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Having fun.
Comment from Ulla
Wow, Yvonne, I really liked this Paradelle poem. It's an intriguing form and you actually had me spellbound. I loved it. It looks so easy to write, but I bet it's not. All the best of luck with this gem. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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Wow, Yvonne, I really liked this Paradelle poem. It's an intriguing form and you actually had me spellbound. I loved it. It looks so easy to write, but I bet it's not. All the best of luck with this gem. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 18-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from royowen
I'm not sure about this form, I like repetitive lines, but this is not the form I had in mind, there's one line with an article, and that doesn't sound so good Yvonne, but great attempt my friend,
Suggestion : in (a) comfy chair my new book read.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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I'm not sure about this form, I like repetitive lines, but this is not the form I had in mind, there's one line with an article, and that doesn't sound so good Yvonne, but great attempt my friend,
Suggestion : in (a) comfy chair my new book read.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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It's meant to be bad. It was created as a joke. Thanks for reviewing.
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Hmmm, I?m not laughing.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
What a great poem.
What a great poem.
It perfectly expresses how I feel.
It perfectly expresses how I feel.
I read it while looking at my garden gnome.
I read it while looking at my garden gnome.
Did I mention I slipped on a banana peel?
Did I mention I slipped on a banana peel?
This is an excellent Paradelle.
This is an excellent Paradelle.
Maybe the best. Who can tell?
Maybe the best. Who can tell?
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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What a great poem.
What a great poem.
It perfectly expresses how I feel.
It perfectly expresses how I feel.
I read it while looking at my garden gnome.
I read it while looking at my garden gnome.
Did I mention I slipped on a banana peel?
Did I mention I slipped on a banana peel?
This is an excellent Paradelle.
This is an excellent Paradelle.
Maybe the best. Who can tell?
Maybe the best. Who can tell?
Comment Written 18-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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Oh, you! I'm so glad you've come back to FS. I miss having someone to banter with. Thank so much for the stars!
Comment from eliz100
You did meet the requirement for repetitiveness. I can see why it might have a practical joke. It is silly to me. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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You did meet the requirement for repetitiveness. I can see why it might have a practical joke. It is silly to me. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, damommy. The picture was perfect. Your words showed the need for the picture. It was the need to lock the doors yet the need not to get up. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n hugs!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, damommy. The picture was perfect. Your words showed the need for the picture. It was the need to lock the doors yet the need not to get up. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n hugs!
Comment Written 18-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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Thank you. Hugs to you.
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You are so welcome, Yvonne.
Comment from Sally Law
This is the hardest poetry form to date, I think. You did a splendid job from my observation. I really hope you're doing well. Get to that book!
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming vote.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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This is the hardest poetry form to date, I think. You did a splendid job from my observation. I really hope you're doing well. Get to that book!
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming vote.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 18-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Sally for reviewing, and for your encouragement.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is the second poem I've read for this writing prompt. I have never heard of this type of poem before today. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. I enjoyed reading. So far, I like yours the best.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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This is the second poem I've read for this writing prompt. I have never heard of this type of poem before today. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. I enjoyed reading. So far, I like yours the best.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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Thank you for saying so.
