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Finally Finding love

finding love in the right place with the right face

4 total reviews 
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
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Author,
This is such a beautiful love story. How many of us have gone to that "bar" and found nothing?
Great story!
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
    thanks a lot we actually met on a bus!
Comment from Sarah Tummey
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It's interesting that you used "Frown" and "Dread", but you put an ed on the end of both. I wouldn't have thought of doing that.

I love to hear how people meet.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
    thanks I will look at it
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I loved this story of love, the search and the lucky find here that lasted 45 years. How wonderful and I enjoyed the process here, fine words for the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
    thanks as usual
Comment from JT traveller
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Absolutely beautiful story that comes full circle from start to finish.

An exquisite read about a long and enduring romance and relationships.

I am unclear as to what this is in the middle of your writing, sometimes this site changes my writing in this manner also,

" "eshim chonshim"
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Easily remedied I'm sure.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts about being in the right place at the right time.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2023
    I will go and fix that. Fan Story does not do non-English characters I have discovered.
reply by JT traveller on 14-Feb-2023
    FS does it to my writing all of the time. Frustrating! Have a great day. Jacqueline