Quiet Lawyer
Viewing comments for Chapter 61 "Quiet Lawyer Chapter 29 B"Can a broken heart be mended?
32 total reviews
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
It all looks fine to me although I'm reading an individual chapter and not the book.
The setting, characters, grammar, punctuation and 'flow' of the chapter are
great.
I'm sure the book will be great.
Good luck,
Shirley
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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It all looks fine to me although I'm reading an individual chapter and not the book.
The setting, characters, grammar, punctuation and 'flow' of the chapter are
great.
I'm sure the book will be great.
Good luck,
Shirley
Comment Written 18-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from mizzkris20
I'm jumping in on this one at chapter 29. The scene with Jim and Cordero leaving in the pickup and the gravel scattering against Alexandra's window adds a sense of finality and separation. I missed the kiss and everything. I wanted him to ask her to stay.I need to go back and read the other chapters.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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I'm jumping in on this one at chapter 29. The scene with Jim and Cordero leaving in the pickup and the gravel scattering against Alexandra's window adds a sense of finality and separation. I missed the kiss and everything. I wanted him to ask her to stay.I need to go back and read the other chapters.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Thank you for stopping by. Sunday will be the final chapter. Next Sunday, I'm starting a new novel.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh my! Cordero, where's your head? Go find your lady live before it's too late!
This post is very well written. I understand about multiple rewrites, but they have worked for you. This chapter is flawless and cohesive.
Great job. I look forward to the next chapter!
Rhonda
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Oh my! Cordero, where's your head? Go find your lady live before it's too late!
This post is very well written. I understand about multiple rewrites, but they have worked for you. This chapter is flawless and cohesive.
Great job. I look forward to the next chapter!
Rhonda
Comment Written 17-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. We'll see of these two stubborn people who gives in, if it's either of them. LOL
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Lol, stubbornness will make them lose what they don?t want to lose, lol.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I really hate it when two people who love each other refuse to be the first one to admit to their love. They have both done everything to prove their love, except to say I love you.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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I really hate it when two people who love each other refuse to be the first one to admit to their love. They have both done everything to prove their love, except to say I love you.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the understanding. We'll see of these two stubborn people who gives in, if it's either of them. LOL
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is another great chapter, Barbara, but somehow I thought that Cord and Ali were already engaged to be married. I must have misread the past few chapters. Anyway, let me know where I went wrong. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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This is another great chapter, Barbara, but somehow I thought that Cord and Ali were already engaged to be married. I must have misread the past few chapters. Anyway, let me know where I went wrong. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 16-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Cord talked about it, but has never proposed. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jim Wile
I really liked the dialog today, Barbara. This was very strong writing. Misunderstandings abound as both Cord and Ali are having trouble figuring each other out. This has been a great read, and I'm looking forward to the final chapter. Jim
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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I really liked the dialog today, Barbara. This was very strong writing. Misunderstandings abound as both Cord and Ali are having trouble figuring each other out. This has been a great read, and I'm looking forward to the final chapter. Jim
Comment Written 16-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. Now we see if either of these stubborn people will give in. LOL
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I'm guessing they will!
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Well written.
I understand putting tension, conflict, and suspense into a story, but Ali deviated from her developed character. Maybe it's the way humans do (fickle), but Ali built a box and put Cord into it. It would be heart-breaking, but I would not return to her. She refused his picnic romance and then announced she had no reason to to be with him. Done.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Well written.
I understand putting tension, conflict, and suspense into a story, but Ali deviated from her developed character. Maybe it's the way humans do (fickle), but Ali built a box and put Cord into it. It would be heart-breaking, but I would not return to her. She refused his picnic romance and then announced she had no reason to to be with him. Done.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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LOL Let's see what happens. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jacquelyn popp
Very well written, and well done on your chapter. The idea that she was going back and not planning to return was a surprise to me. This is definitely a great installment of your novel and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Very well written, and well done on your chapter. The idea that she was going back and not planning to return was a surprise to me. This is definitely a great installment of your novel and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. Now we see if either of these stubborn people will give in. LOL
Comment from Anne Johnston
Well done on this chapter, but oh so sad. I was certain that this was going to be the day when they finally owned up to how they felt about each other. Will it change in the next chapter?
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Well done on this chapter, but oh so sad. I was certain that this was going to be the day when they finally owned up to how they felt about each other. Will it change in the next chapter?
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. Now we see if either of these stubborn people will give in. LOL
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You are welcome. Waiting eagerly for the conclusion.
Comment from BethShelby
I can't imagine Ali believeing Cord didn't want her to stay. To me he acts like a man very much in love. I thought they had already been making wedding plans. I guess no matter how close people are they can still misread the other person. The idea she was going back and not planning to return was a surprise but maybe what Rosa is telling her will help.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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I can't imagine Ali believeing Cord didn't want her to stay. To me he acts like a man very much in love. I thought they had already been making wedding plans. I guess no matter how close people are they can still misread the other person. The idea she was going back and not planning to return was a surprise but maybe what Rosa is telling her will help.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. Now we see if either of these stubborn people will give in. LOL
