Blackout
50 word2 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I love the ending of this tale. It leaves the reader not knowing which way things will happen, which is interesting. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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I love the ending of this tale. It leaves the reader not knowing which way things will happen, which is interesting. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Thanks for such an interesting review zanya
Comment from JT traveller
Good idea to grab a beer while it is still cold. Haha.
On a more serious note you were able to express so much in so many words. Which Oxford Street, Sydney, London or elsewhere?
A great read, which, through your descriptive lines provides the reader with vivid imagery. I loved it.
Best of luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Good idea to grab a beer while it is still cold. Haha.
On a more serious note you were able to express so much in so many words. Which Oxford Street, Sydney, London or elsewhere?
A great read, which, through your descriptive lines provides the reader with vivid imagery. I loved it.
Best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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A review filled with encouragement zanya