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Random Rhyme and Petty Prose

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a collection of phenomenally mundane work.

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Comment from Jasmine Girl
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One hundred words poem is a type peom that you have created. How can you write a poem that has that many words and rhymes? Your scripts are short than that sometimes.

Well done.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
    Thanks, Lisa, for giving this a look.
Comment from thoughtgame2
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Very smart 100 words sir. I knew I could count on you to deliver something to make me smile a little more today...and it was well crafted. Thank you very much

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 Comment Written 12-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
    Thank you, TG
Comment from judiverse
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Good one! What hoops we have to jump through to meet the requirements for some of these contests. You have to include certain words and have the right number of syllables. It's confusing, because sometimes you have to have a certain number of words. My mother-in-law was a great one for turkey bacon. She also liked to stick tofu in stuff when no one was looking. Glad you made mention of Terre Haute. It's not as sinful as it once was. judi

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
    Thanks, Judi. I just want some challenges I want to take.
Comment from damommy
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Is this about turkey bacon which I hate. Also turkey hot dogs. If so, I agree. But then, maybe it's about contests on this site. A lot of people are complaining about them. Love the ending sentence. Short and to the point.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
    Thanks, Yvonne. Just a funny poem.
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol! Thanks for the fun, Bill! On one hand, I feel like this is a commentary on the extreme limitations of some of the contests here and on the other, it's a rant against fake bacon. Both are funny!

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 Comment Written 12-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
    Those are world?s big issues, Helen. : )