Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from nomi338
I love this story. I love how the chickens are coming home to roost. The curtains are beginning to close of Pat Rogers and his means of escape are starting to disappear. Too bad. When a rabid dog displays the fact that he is rabid, he is usually taken down. That is the prescribed method of dealing with such.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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I love this story. I love how the chickens are coming home to roost. The curtains are beginning to close of Pat Rogers and his means of escape are starting to disappear. Too bad. When a rabid dog displays the fact that he is rabid, he is usually taken down. That is the prescribed method of dealing with such.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Ric Myworld
It's always nice to see the bad guys get what they have coming to them, but in this case we're going to have to sit back and waiting a long time. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
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It's always nice to see the bad guys get what they have coming to them, but in this case we're going to have to sit back and waiting a long time. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Ben Colder
Barb, I have learned much from your work. You have a way of capturing an audience and sliding them into a welcoming and readiness for the next paragraph. A rare treat.
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Barb, I have learned much from your work. You have a way of capturing an audience and sliding them into a welcoming and readiness for the next paragraph. A rare treat.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The question is....why did she hold Cord's hand and then quickly take her hand away? I do wonder what is on her mind. I am sure the ending is a miraculous ending.
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The question is....why did she hold Cord's hand and then quickly take her hand away? I do wonder what is on her mind. I am sure the ending is a miraculous ending.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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That's the big question. We'll find out on Valentines Day.
Comment from estory
True to form, Alex screws done Rogers in the courtroom with meticulous professional steps. There is no room for him to breath. The judge is decidedly on her side. Once again, as always, the dialogue is crisp and taught with tension. We can see Alex and Rogers shooting daggers at each other between lines. Cord is on the sidelines here. I didn't detect any spam, there's nice polish on it. estory
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True to form, Alex screws done Rogers in the courtroom with meticulous professional steps. There is no room for him to breath. The judge is decidedly on her side. Once again, as always, the dialogue is crisp and taught with tension. We can see Alex and Rogers shooting daggers at each other between lines. Cord is on the sidelines here. I didn't detect any spam, there's nice polish on it. estory
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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from Shirley McLain
That was quick and straight forward. The thought that popped into my mind was that the judge could be biased because of what appeared to be a friendship between Cord and the judge in the last chapter. You did a great job, and I enjoyed reading it as always. Have a wonderful afternoon. Shirley
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That was quick and straight forward. The thought that popped into my mind was that the judge could be biased because of what appeared to be a friendship between Cord and the judge in the last chapter. You did a great job, and I enjoyed reading it as always. Have a wonderful afternoon. Shirley
Comment Written 09-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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I think in a small town there is bias. We live two houses down from our judge. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi, Barbara, I just don't have a six left this time of the week. I'm so sorry. I really enjoyed reading this. I'm surprised having a baby cost that much.
Of course here in Europe all healthcare is free. I really liked the court scene. All best, Ulla:)))
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Hi, Barbara, I just don't have a six left this time of the week. I'm so sorry. I really enjoyed reading this. I'm surprised having a baby cost that much.
Of course here in Europe all healthcare is free. I really liked the court scene. All best, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 09-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Yes, it's expensive here to have a baby. Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from judiverse
Pat will do all the maneuvering he can to get out of his situation. He continues to deny, even though the facts contradict him. I didn't realize the cost of prenatal care and delivery was that high. Really expensive. I understand Lisa not having insurance, though. Great courtroom presentation. Ali thinks of everything on behalf of her clients. Pat will face the hard reality of having to pay those women. He'll hardly have any walking around money left. Great chapter. judi
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Pat will do all the maneuvering he can to get out of his situation. He continues to deny, even though the facts contradict him. I didn't realize the cost of prenatal care and delivery was that high. Really expensive. I understand Lisa not having insurance, though. Great courtroom presentation. Ali thinks of everything on behalf of her clients. Pat will face the hard reality of having to pay those women. He'll hardly have any walking around money left. Great chapter. judi
Comment Written 09-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. I researched the cost of childbirth in Texas. It's probably higher in other parts of the country.
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IYou're welcome. I looked up my state of Indiana, and it's $12,000 here. judi
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
OH, I haven't a six again!! I was disappointed the chapter wasn't longer, but I'm sure there was a reason. I really thought Ali did an amazing job in the courtroom, and has Pat nicely tied up tight so he doesn't have any wiggle room to get out of it. Lol. This is a great chapter, Barbara, and I can't wait to find out what is on Ali's mind that has Cord worried. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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OH, I haven't a six again!! I was disappointed the chapter wasn't longer, but I'm sure there was a reason. I really thought Ali did an amazing job in the courtroom, and has Pat nicely tied up tight so he doesn't have any wiggle room to get out of it. Lol. This is a great chapter, Barbara, and I can't wait to find out what is on Ali's mind that has Cord worried. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 09-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. Yes, we'll find out what on Ali's mind on Valentines Day when I post the next segment.
Comment from jmdg1954
Chapters moving along nicely. With only two more to go, I'm curious about what's bothering Alexandra (I have my suspicions) and how it'll be handled in the novel.
Good, believable courtroom action. The judge does not like Rogers and lets him be aware of it.
Nicely done.
John
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Chapters moving along nicely. With only two more to go, I'm curious about what's bothering Alexandra (I have my suspicions) and how it'll be handled in the novel.
Good, believable courtroom action. The judge does not like Rogers and lets him be aware of it.
Nicely done.
John
Comment Written 09-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. Yes, we'll find out what on Ali's mind on Valentines Day when I post the next segment.
