Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 " Your Brain on Procreation"a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
21 total reviews
Comment from eliz100
This is an excellent example of a father explaining to his son how babies are made. Seems like the son did not get it. I believe by the time a parent is ready to have the talk, kids already know. Your piece is well-written. I enjoyed reading it. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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This is an excellent example of a father explaining to his son how babies are made. Seems like the son did not get it. I believe by the time a parent is ready to have the talk, kids already know. Your piece is well-written. I enjoyed reading it. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Elizabeth
Comment from phill doran
Hello Bill,
I found this extra star down the back of the couch. I thought to give it to you, it looks like you could use it.
When I read you (which I do a lot, even if I do not review) I think of a radio, tuned to a slightly different frequency. Not everybody can tune in.
You write very well Bill (often too short, I think you could stretch yourself a bit more: just my [not so humble] opinion). You have great wit and imagination - as in this piece of life observed.
I'm not going to elaborate, other than to say that I enjoyed this amusing piece.
...and I wish you well with your continued writing.
cheers
phill
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2023
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Hello Bill,
I found this extra star down the back of the couch. I thought to give it to you, it looks like you could use it.
When I read you (which I do a lot, even if I do not review) I think of a radio, tuned to a slightly different frequency. Not everybody can tune in.
You write very well Bill (often too short, I think you could stretch yourself a bit more: just my [not so humble] opinion). You have great wit and imagination - as in this piece of life observed.
I'm not going to elaborate, other than to say that I enjoyed this amusing piece.
...and I wish you well with your continued writing.
cheers
phill
Comment Written 10-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much, Phil. I have pieced together some chapter stories, but pretty much stick to 'hit and run'.
Comment from susand3022
Hahahahaha!
Bill, you kill me sometimes!
I'd have taken a big rubber spatula and slammed it down in between. "This represents a condom. It's there to keep one away from the other, because if the two mix we end up with another one of you. Now go to your room."
Smart ass kids.
Susan :)
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Hahahahaha!
Bill, you kill me sometimes!
I'd have taken a big rubber spatula and slammed it down in between. "This represents a condom. It's there to keep one away from the other, because if the two mix we end up with another one of you. Now go to your room."
Smart ass kids.
Susan :)
Comment Written 09-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Thanks, Susan. I got this lesson too late.
Comment from kahpot
Well that explanation of that subject is certainly different, so very well written with excellent humor, I think we do it different nowadays, I also like the shape of the shrimp, ****kahpot
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Well that explanation of that subject is certainly different, so very well written with excellent humor, I think we do it different nowadays, I also like the shape of the shrimp, ****kahpot
Comment Written 08-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Thank you, kahpot
Comment from nomi338
Fortunately, dad has a son who knows what making babies are all about. Unfortunately, dad now has making babies on his son's mind which may very well mean that dad is on his way to becoming a grand dad.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Fortunately, dad has a son who knows what making babies are all about. Unfortunately, dad now has making babies on his son's mind which may very well mean that dad is on his way to becoming a grand dad.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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More shrimp then?
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I am all for making more shrimp lookalikes.
Comment from Spitfire
Love it. Did you create the picture? Great dialogue. The son's reactions are hilarious and reveal his innocence especially at the end. Dad needs to find a better way to tell his child about procreation.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Love it. Did you create the picture? Great dialogue. The son's reactions are hilarious and reveal his innocence especially at the end. Dad needs to find a better way to tell his child about procreation.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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The image is from martin smith images on FanArt.
Comment from Sally Law
Oh my! No wonder accidents happen. Well, this is what happens when hormones rule and there's nothing else to go with it. Thank you for the laughs.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Oh my! No wonder accidents happen. Well, this is what happens when hormones rule and there's nothing else to go with it. Thank you for the laughs.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 08-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Sal, for giving this a look.
Comment from Ric Myworld
LOL. Yes, sir, you can't get anything over on kids, and forget trying to use examples for teaching lessons, because they already have everything figured out for themselves. Wrong as it usually is. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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LOL. Yes, sir, you can't get anything over on kids, and forget trying to use examples for teaching lessons, because they already have everything figured out for themselves. Wrong as it usually is. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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I wish I was as smart as I was then.
Comment from John Ciarmello
Hahah! This is super clever, and the banter between father and son is so natural and pushes the short forward to its amusing end! I enjoyed this, Bill. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Hahah! This is super clever, and the banter between father and son is so natural and pushes the short forward to its amusing end! I enjoyed this, Bill. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 08-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Thank you, John.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
With my tough week and this being my first read this morning, I needed a smile. This is funny and clever. I loved the image. A creative and humorous approach to a birds and bees lesson.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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With my tough week and this being my first read this morning, I needed a smile. This is funny and clever. I loved the image. A creative and humorous approach to a birds and bees lesson.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 08-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Mary. Hope the rest of the week goes better.
