Reviews from

We Are One

A large family of nine children

4 total reviews 
Comment from Regina Elliott
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This is such a warm and
happy family poem, Kaiku.
Nine children, holy cow. I
come from 4 other siblings. I thought 5 was a lot
of kids, lol! Congrats on the
2nd place finish. Blessings to
you and yours. ~

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
    Thank you Regina. That is very nice.
Comment from tempeste
Exceptional
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Ciao!

That's a powerful title/ statement which made me think of this proverb: unity is strength.

Obviously your parents were tough folk.

Within a family a child receive the love, care, protection it needs to be happy, healthy and grow and develop well.

Child/teen hood is the most important time in a person s life.

If you want the chops to succeed in life and be of use to society , one must have strong foundations to build on.

Our parents and later our teachers are the ones that should encourage and support their child in their talents and passions , teach them to accept responsibility for their actions and choices and etc

Some of my favourite lines:

Mother, a gift from heaven
Now ageing as fine wine
Sticky fingers til all were gone
Looking down feeling magnificent.

Strong bonds forged while growing up between family members will last a life time:

What we`ve learned through the years
Keeps us close and lovingly dear.
To each - support comes readily.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
    A very nice and thorough review. Thank you.
reply by tempeste on 10-Feb-2023
    You have two votes now 😋
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2023
    Thanks. My day is brighter now.
reply by tempeste on 10-Feb-2023
    😝

    It ?s going to be even brighter in a moment .
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2023
    When I go to Croatia I am thinking of a 2'3 day trip to Rome. Never been there. It`s on my bucket list. Suggestions?
reply by tempeste on 10-Feb-2023
    You should stay at least a week .

    Roma is history at your finger tips ..

    Then two hours by train and you can see Napoli and its beautiful surrounding cities google these .

    Sorrento
    Positano
    Island of Capri
    Ischia

    Then go to Pompei



Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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What a lovely family picture this is and there is a lot of love and pride in these words as you speak of your beloved family. I enjoyed every word, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
    Thank you
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Hello, Mystery Writer!
What a beautiful family!
My husband is the eldest of nine: four boys and five girls.
Your offering resonated deeply with me and I smiled throughout.
In fact, that handsome brother on the end - the one in the suit - reminds me of my own 6'7" son! Smiles all around!

Best Wishes!
diane

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
    That young man is 6?-7"

    Thank you
reply by Mrs. KT on 08-Feb-2023
    I thought so!

    :)