Debating My Alter Ego
I'm always looking for reasons not to exercise.22 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
What a wonderful back and forward debate you are having with yourself, I love the reasons you are making excuses for, an excellent read, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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What a wonderful back and forward debate you are having with yourself, I love the reasons you are making excuses for, an excellent read, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 08-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Thank you for a great review. I enjoyed reading your comments. I also appareciate the good wishes.
Comment from Cherish Adams
Funny. Truthful. A debate we all have participated in within ourselves at some point. Good rhyme scheme, flows well. Good job and good luck. Thank you for your entry. Easy and fun read.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Funny. Truthful. A debate we all have participated in within ourselves at some point. Good rhyme scheme, flows well. Good job and good luck. Thank you for your entry. Easy and fun read.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Thank you for a great review on my decisions entry. I'm glad you found some humor in my poem.
Beth
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Cute. Well done, and realistic for the young at heart. Once a senior, I sent my alterbeing to the attic to collect dust just like the collectibles I store d there. Haven't seen it since.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Cute. Well done, and realistic for the young at heart. Once a senior, I sent my alterbeing to the attic to collect dust just like the collectibles I store d there. Haven't seen it since.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Thanks Tom, I didn't even meet this alterbeing until after I became a senior. Thats when I realized the if I wanted to have a long sprint as a senior that exercize class was in my future. LOL
Comment from Wendy G
Very well done. I have that same internal debate about Pilates, every single week. Your poem is lighthearted and humorous, and I enjoyed it. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Very well done. I have that same internal debate about Pilates, every single week. Your poem is lighthearted and humorous, and I enjoyed it. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Wendy. I glad you got my attempt at lighthearted humor but I really do have these debates with myself as I search for excuses.
Comment from Sherry SG
What a thoroughly enjoyable poem this is. I can totally relate to it as I exercise regularly as well and these debates and consequent resolutions do happen often. Hahaha. Nice job!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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What a thoroughly enjoyable poem this is. I can totally relate to it as I exercise regularly as well and these debates and consequent resolutions do happen often. Hahaha. Nice job!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Sherry. I so glad you enjoyed my peom. Today is debate day once again. I'm sure the alter will win. It's a nice day. I don't have an excuse. LOL
Comment from Kaiku
I am sure you`re not the only one who spells procrastination first thing in the morning. I think there are many who stand in front of the mirror and say, why doesn`t this go away as they look at their waistline. Imagine that. I am working out today, noon to be exact. Thanks for the reminder.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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I am sure you`re not the only one who spells procrastination first thing in the morning. I think there are many who stand in front of the mirror and say, why doesn`t this go away as they look at their waistline. Imagine that. I am working out today, noon to be exact. Thanks for the reminder.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Thank you for a nice review. Yes looking in the mirror is a big motivator. Exercise helps you feel and look better.
Comment from JT traveller
We all know that feeling. A humorous poem about a daily battle we have with ourselves. I thoroughly enjoyed it. This morning, I did not wish to exercise but I did. I rode a bicycle to the bakery and had cake for breakfast ð???
Just a minor correction in your introduction,
"I'm always lookinf for reasons not to exercise."
Looking.
A fantastic poem. Well presented. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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We all know that feeling. A humorous poem about a daily battle we have with ourselves. I thoroughly enjoyed it. This morning, I did not wish to exercise but I did. I rode a bicycle to the bakery and had cake for breakfast ð???
Just a minor correction in your introduction,
"I'm always lookinf for reasons not to exercise."
Looking.
A fantastic poem. Well presented. Have a great day.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for the review and comments and for noticing the error in the heading.
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My pleasure. Have a great day. Jacqueline
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A relatable poem written with wit and lightness. The flow is good. The poem stays on point. The images are clear. The picture sets the mood for the poem well.
Thanks for sharing. Good luck.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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A relatable poem written with wit and lightness. The flow is good. The poem stays on point. The images are clear. The picture sets the mood for the poem well.
Thanks for sharing. Good luck.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the review and nice comment. I appreciate it.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I can identify we every word here as I have the same battle every day as I know I need to exercise and feel guilty if I don't go, so I make myself go. Loved the rhymes and flow, a fun write for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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I can identify we every word here as I have the same battle every day as I know I need to exercise and feel guilty if I don't go, so I make myself go. Loved the rhymes and flow, a fun write for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you for a great review. I'm glad you liked and could identify with my little poem.
Comment from royowen
I've always had a strong alter ego, but mine has saved me on a couple of occasions, and I think that's God, even when I was rolling drunk, my sober half was goading and guiding, but I still think it's a guiding hand, always had my welfare in mind, beautifully written in abab rhyme. Well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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I've always had a strong alter ego, but mine has saved me on a couple of occasions, and I think that's God, even when I was rolling drunk, my sober half was goading and guiding, but I still think it's a guiding hand, always had my welfare in mind, beautifully written in abab rhyme. Well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you Roy, I appreciate the review and comments. I guess if didn't have that side of me pushing me to do something that seems like it might be unpleasant, Id likely not be healthy at all.
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That?s true, bless you
