Majestic Waterfalls
Calm, Serene14 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
These seven words or less poem, Majestic Waterfalls, has the proper formatting and creates a scene where the heart can be at rest.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
These seven words or less poem, Majestic Waterfalls, has the proper formatting and creates a scene where the heart can be at rest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Yes contest is over.
Comment from JT traveller
Great choice of illustration and layout.
Just personally, to me, a waterfall is powerful and has impact, it does not scream, "serene". This is just my humble opinion.
The last 2 words lost impact and that was the writing prompt.
Vivid imagery and a feel good poem.
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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
Great choice of illustration and layout.
Just personally, to me, a waterfall is powerful and has impact, it does not scream, "serene". This is just my humble opinion.
The last 2 words lost impact and that was the writing prompt.
Vivid imagery and a feel good poem.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Contest is over.
Comment from patcelaw
With mist from falling water hitting us in the face can have a wonderful feeling of magic under the waterfalls. Good luck in this contest and God bless.
Patricia
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
With mist from falling water hitting us in the face can have a wonderful feeling of magic under the waterfalls. Good luck in this contest and God bless.
Patricia
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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The contest is over!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your words plus the image paired perfectly, Pookietoo.
I enjoyed reading your well-crafted poem. Your word
count was correct. In 7 words your words painted a
great picture for readers.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
Your words plus the image paired perfectly, Pookietoo.
I enjoyed reading your well-crafted poem. Your word
count was correct. In 7 words your words painted a
great picture for readers.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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The contest is over!
Comment from harmony13
The first two line of this poem flow and connect well. The last line says
it all! The author's words are calming and filled with peace. The artwork
adds to the beauty of these words. The author's title goes well with the
words and theme of this poem.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
The first two line of this poem flow and connect well. The last line says
it all! The author's words are calming and filled with peace. The artwork
adds to the beauty of these words. The author's title goes well with the
words and theme of this poem.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Thanks
Comment from Wendy G
A stunnjng image accompanies your few well-chosen words. The scene is indeed one of serenity and peace. Sending best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
A stunnjng image accompanies your few well-chosen words. The scene is indeed one of serenity and peace. Sending best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thanks
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The image is so beautiful as well as the words. There is something about a waterfall; it is a cascade of water falling from a steep incline. It is a river or stream flowing over a rocky foundation.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
The image is so beautiful as well as the words. There is something about a waterfall; it is a cascade of water falling from a steep incline. It is a river or stream flowing over a rocky foundation.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thanks!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the Seven Words or Less Poem writing prompt contest.
Good word count and selection.
I love the imagery and presentation of a waterfal.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
Wonderful entry for the Seven Words or Less Poem writing prompt contest.
Good word count and selection.
I love the imagery and presentation of a waterfal.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thanks!
Comment from Mary Shifman
I like this poem a lot. It has beautiful imagery and evokes a feeling of peacefulness. It makes me want to be sitting there on a rock dreaming or meditating. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
I like this poem a lot. It has beautiful imagery and evokes a feeling of peacefulness. It makes me want to be sitting there on a rock dreaming or meditating. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thanks, I need it
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You are welcome.
Comment from jmdg1954
I found that each line lends itself to the waterfall...
Ripples in the waters leading to the cascading, majestic yet powerful falls, pooling into calm and serene waters.
I enjoyed thinking this one through. It brought a calm sensation.
John
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
I found that each line lends itself to the waterfall...
Ripples in the waters leading to the cascading, majestic yet powerful falls, pooling into calm and serene waters.
I enjoyed thinking this one through. It brought a calm sensation.
John
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thanks!