Hope Not
..sometimes we may ask when will it stop2 total reviews
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Hope contest. I like the use of yesterday and tomorrow. I did wonder about the extra spaces within the words - yesterday, sorrow, tomorrow. If I were to add any input, it would be to enlarge the font or make it bold AND perhaps tweak the end line - Hope for tomorrow OR Tomorrow brings hope.
Best of luck for the competition.
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This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Hope contest. I like the use of yesterday and tomorrow. I did wonder about the extra spaces within the words - yesterday, sorrow, tomorrow. If I were to add any input, it would be to enlarge the font or make it bold AND perhaps tweak the end line - Hope for tomorrow OR Tomorrow brings hope.
Best of luck for the competition.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
With hope we can ride the storm and battle the waves and challenge the tough times in life and I love the positivity in your words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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With hope we can ride the storm and battle the waves and challenge the tough times in life and I love the positivity in your words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jan-2023
