Within the Bone
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "A Foot in Each World"A tale of love, magic, and revenge.
2 total reviews
Comment from Shirley McLain
A well written chapter full of action, adventure and tension. You did a great job as always. I didn't see a thing wrong. I'm enjoying the story. Know I want to know what is waiting for Mara. Have a wonderful Sunday. Shirley
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
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A well written chapter full of action, adventure and tension. You did a great job as always. I didn't see a thing wrong. I'm enjoying the story. Know I want to know what is waiting for Mara. Have a wonderful Sunday. Shirley
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it and I?m glad the story is enjoyable. Have a wonderful day!
Comment from prettybluebirds
This chapter is filled with suspense. The first word grabbed me and held my interest until the end. The dialogue is so good that this reader feels like she is there with them. Your descriptions are vivid and complete the story.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
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This chapter is filled with suspense. The first word grabbed me and held my interest until the end. The dialogue is so good that this reader feels like she is there with them. Your descriptions are vivid and complete the story.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I?m glad the descriptions come out well. I?m always a little nervous with novel chapters since they?re removed from context on here. I really appreciate your time and I hope you have a wonderful day.
