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Sonshine

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Comment from Write Right Writer
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Hi Debi...

Here is my ten-word review:

"Well done, my friend. Way to go. Let him shine!"

Blessings...

Curt (WRW)
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 Comment Written 23-Jan-2023

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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What a great song to accompany your winning entry,
Debi. I enjoyed both greatly. Your entry was well-presented.
I liked the bright yellow background, the picture was perfect,
and your words so true. The use of 'son' was an awesome
way to include in your message. You gave readers something
to think about in their own lives. Great work.
Thanks for sharing and congratulations on your first-place win, Jan

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2023

Comment from Douglas Goff
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What an exquisite play on words! You mind is wonderful.

This is a great entry for the Ten Word Poem Contest.

I have a feeling that the writing muse is going to smile brightly upon you in the voting booth.
D

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
    Douglas, I do believe I am falling for that little frog. I've only kissed a frog once before, but he turned into my Prince Charming. You say the nicest things. My frog has never once told me that I have a wonderful mind. I'm afraid I already told you what attracted us to each other in my review for boobs. Oh darn, I gave it away. Lol... Thanks for always being so kind, and I just want to kiss one more frog and see what happens. I will know when next time I see you, what your picture shows. So Pucker up green boy......😘
reply by Douglas Goff on 23-Jan-2023
    Ha! You are the best! Remember, some frogs are just that, frogs. And you do have a VERY wonderful mind, and from your own omission, other wonderful attributes as well. Stay you because it?s fun!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
    Hehehehehehehe! I don't know. I maybe losing it Y'know? At 68, it is very possible. Lol! Thank you right back for the fun reviews and being awesome!!
reply by Douglas Goff on 23-Jan-2023
    Here here to awesome people! Of which we have both decided that we are!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Excellent entry for the 10 Word Poem writing prompt contest. Good word count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery.

Good luck!

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2023

Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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I love this poem. If we have Jesus or God in our life, we do have sunshine in our heart. "You are my sunshine" expresses there is only one person to make us shine every day.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
    I thank you so very much Rosemary! You are always so sweet, and I can't thank you enough for your kind comments regarding my Sonshine poem. Much appreciated my dear friend!

    An extra big thank you for that extra big star!
Comment from mermaids
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I like your clever play on words and how a spiritual feel and flow comes through your two lines. Jesus brings us light as your second line shows. You say much in only two lines, excellent poem.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2023

Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
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The colours chosen hear and the illustration are very apt. The poem with its play on words is simple but memorable, visually and emotionally so it leaves an impact on the reader!

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2023

Comment from Shirley McLain
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Love the 10 words and your picture. I have always been fond of BamBam and Pebbles. I watched the Flintstones every time it came on. You did a great job. Have a wonderful Sunday. Shirley

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
    Shirley, thank you so very much for this lovely review for this little faith filled poem. And yes, that song has been one of my favorites since I was young. And still sing it here and there. And I love that you loved that episode and song too. Thank you for your very kind review and comments and the lovely gift of six stars. Thanks you again my dear friend.
Comment from jaded831
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Beautiful poem, I especially like your play on words. I just started reading the entrees, I need to read them all before voting, but so far I think your poem is the winner. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
    Oh thank you so much for your kind review and comments about this poem. And thank you also for telling me that it was in the voting booth. I appreciate it so much, my dear friend.
Comment from lyenochka
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I remember that song! Of course, I like your change to focus on Jesus by the switch to "Sonshine" ! May He always shine through you. Best wishes in the contest!!

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
    Thank you my sweet friend. Sometimes I will catch myself singing it and then think, this is from so long ago, but the message is just as great! Thanks afain Helen for the lovely review and words fo this poem.