Bad Moving Day
Complete Fiction.48 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
This is cute, although I must admit thst I don't get the joke. The image and you're notes made me laugh, your grandson sounds like a funny kid, but what does ketchup have to do with it? Best of luckbin the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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This is cute, although I must admit thst I don't get the joke. The image and you're notes made me laugh, your grandson sounds like a funny kid, but what does ketchup have to do with it? Best of luckbin the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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Thanks Sharon for the kind words for this poem. That's ok that you didn't get it. I think you almost have to be a ketchup loving kid, but my grandson (who doesn't pound on his head in the bathroom, but pounds on the bottom of the ketchup bottle to get more out towards the end of it. That is the joke. Thanks again for the nice revew.
Comment from jaded831
Thanks for the laugh, great way to start my day, on a positive note. Your poem I feel is a winner, even if you don't win. I can totally see this happening, great tone, carefully placed words. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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Thanks for the laugh, great way to start my day, on a positive note. Your poem I feel is a winner, even if you don't win. I can totally see this happening, great tone, carefully placed words. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for such a lovely review, comments and your gift of six stars. What a nice little package deal! I appreciate it so much my dear friend!
It is doing well and tied for first so far so I appreciate your kind good luck wishes!
Comment from Douglas Goff
Very good, indeed. The picture is absolutely perfect. I wonder if this is a proven method for constipation? Probably not.
Great work. Good luck on the competition. You bested mine. Jolly good!
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Very good, indeed. The picture is absolutely perfect. I wonder if this is a proven method for constipation? Probably not.
Great work. Good luck on the competition. You bested mine. Jolly good!
D
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 25 syllable poem you have penned for the 25-syllable poem contest. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest. teri
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This is a very well written 25 syllable poem you have penned for the 25-syllable poem contest. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest. teri
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
Comment from MissMerri
Hahahahahahaha!! This is the cutest! I supposed it was a true story, until I looked at the description and saw it was "complete fiction." Still, it is clever and funny and creates in the mind a rather hysterical scene. I loved it, and think it will do very well in the contest. Good luck! MM
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Hahahahahahaha!! This is the cutest! I supposed it was a true story, until I looked at the description and saw it was "complete fiction." Still, it is clever and funny and creates in the mind a rather hysterical scene. I loved it, and think it will do very well in the contest. Good luck! MM
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
Comment from Earl Corp
This was a great contest entry. It's funny and something I would vote for. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy in the new year.
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This was a great contest entry. It's funny and something I would vote for. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy in the new year.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
Comment from prettybluebirds
I got a chuckle out of this one. I guess it makes sense when one thinks about it. I love the picture you attached to your wiring. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
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I got a chuckle out of this one. I guess it makes sense when one thinks about it. I love the picture you attached to your wiring. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
Comment from mermaids
This is a creative and clever, humorous poem. It brings a smile to the reader's face. It is also a good children's poem. The humor is cute. "Works for ketchup" is a funny last line. Excellent use of words.
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This is a creative and clever, humorous poem. It brings a smile to the reader's face. It is also a good children's poem. The humor is cute. "Works for ketchup" is a funny last line. Excellent use of words.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Oh, dear, this was totally unexpected! How funny is this, and your image of the little boy on the potty with the ketchup-red background are perfect for this. I like it! Good luck with the contest.
Pam
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Oh, dear, this was totally unexpected! How funny is this, and your image of the little boy on the potty with the ketchup-red background are perfect for this. I like it! Good luck with the contest.
Pam
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem is witty and shows how hard potty training or just going can do.
I think he had a good idea to try out. To bad it didn't work like it hitting the bottle works for loosening ketchup to make it come out.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
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This poem is witty and shows how hard potty training or just going can do.
I think he had a good idea to try out. To bad it didn't work like it hitting the bottle works for loosening ketchup to make it come out.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
