Bad Moving Day
Complete Fiction.48 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! That's just too cute. I wonder if this was inspired by one of your children or grandchildren? I can see what this one won the contest! Congratulations!!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Lol! That's just too cute. I wonder if this was inspired by one of your children or grandchildren? I can see what this one won the contest! Congratulations!!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Awe Helen, how can you expect me to tell you anything with our little friend, Jerry laughing? Thank you and yes it was our 🥴goober. He told me that while trying to get the ketchup out of the bottle for his corn dogs.
Thanks for finding this and reviewing. You are so sweet!
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Kids say the cutest things!
Comment from Write Right Writer
Debi...
How clever! It's cute, it's funny, and should do well in the contest. And such a perfect image for your poem! Good luck!
Blessings...
Curt (WRW)
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Debi...
How clever! It's cute, it's funny, and should do well in the contest. And such a perfect image for your poem! Good luck!
Blessings...
Curt (WRW)
Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, your 25 syllables told quite the story, Debi.
Great job without being gross--at least in my
opinion. The picture was perfect for your well thought
out words.
Congratulations on your win, Jan
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Haha, your 25 syllables told quite the story, Debi.
Great job without being gross--at least in my
opinion. The picture was perfect for your well thought
out words.
Congratulations on your win, Jan
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Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
Comment from l.raven
Hi Debi, LOL my sweet friend...
right when you thought you had heard it all...
but you have to give credit where credit is do...
it does work with a ketchup bottle...LOL...
I love your poem sweet girl...and the picture
couldn't be any better...well done you...love you...
Linda xxoo
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Hi Debi, LOL my sweet friend...
right when you thought you had heard it all...
but you have to give credit where credit is do...
it does work with a ketchup bottle...LOL...
I love your poem sweet girl...and the picture
couldn't be any better...well done you...love you...
Linda xxoo
Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
Comment from susand3022
Oh, I wish I had a 6!
Debi, thanks for the belly laugh! From the mouths of babes! That's just the funniest thing I've heard in ... well days really, but I've got a father that's losing his mind so we have all kinds of silly stuff going on. His memory is definitely going and last night it was making him nuts. But apparently the fact that he was making Joanie, my sister, nuts because of it somehow made him feel better, so it was okay. Hahaha... I'm not sure how that works exactly, but I'm glad it does.
I loved the potty report! Not my usual kind with the old man... if he starts banging the top of his head, at least I'll know why! lol
Susan :)
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Oh, I wish I had a 6!
Debi, thanks for the belly laugh! From the mouths of babes! That's just the funniest thing I've heard in ... well days really, but I've got a father that's losing his mind so we have all kinds of silly stuff going on. His memory is definitely going and last night it was making him nuts. But apparently the fact that he was making Joanie, my sister, nuts because of it somehow made him feel better, so it was okay. Hahaha... I'm not sure how that works exactly, but I'm glad it does.
I loved the potty report! Not my usual kind with the old man... if he starts banging the top of his head, at least I'll know why! lol
Susan :)
Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
Comment from Regina Elliott
And me out of 6 stars,
dag-gone it! Hello dear
sweet poetess friend, this is
so imaginatively penned.
It's a fun humor poem.
Congratulations on the win!
Have a Happy Weekend with
family, and blessings!
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And me out of 6 stars,
dag-gone it! Hello dear
sweet poetess friend, this is
so imaginatively penned.
It's a fun humor poem.
Congratulations on the win!
Have a Happy Weekend with
family, and blessings!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
Comment from Ulla
Ah yes, Debi, to get the last drop out. I see what you mean. This is just too funny. No wonder you won with this little gem. Congratulations. All the best and a hug, Ulla xx
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Ah yes, Debi, to get the last drop out. I see what you mean. This is just too funny. No wonder you won with this little gem. Congratulations. All the best and a hug, Ulla xx
Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
Comment from Karyn2
Oh Debi! That is so funny! The way our "tomato sauce"/ ketchup bottle gets battered to the very last drop, I hope this boy fares better! I'm sure I would count the syllables wrong if it was my entry, but this is very well done.
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Oh Debi! That is so funny! The way our "tomato sauce"/ ketchup bottle gets battered to the very last drop, I hope this boy fares better! I'm sure I would count the syllables wrong if it was my entry, but this is very well done.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
Comment from Tom Horonzy
So little you wrote and yet it makes sense. Well done. Glad you bought a brand name of ketchup for Walmart, and Aldi's is too watery to require anyone to hit the bottom of the bottle.
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So little you wrote and yet it makes sense. Well done. Glad you bought a brand name of ketchup for Walmart, and Aldi's is too watery to require anyone to hit the bottom of the bottle.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
Comment from jake cosmos aller
strange but funny poem about a young boy and well having a problem on the toilet and his solution - patting his head to encourage things to go their natural way.
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strange but funny poem about a young boy and well having a problem on the toilet and his solution - patting his head to encourage things to go their natural way.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
