Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Well, very gruesome and violent. I expect nothing less from a Marine!
This line made me laugh:

Once in the parking lot, he got into The Car That Will Not Be Named and headed out to the access road.

Too funny. Thank you for giving us a peek into the dark side of your mind.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023

Thanks, Douglas, for giving this a look.

reply by Douglas Goff on 18-Jan-2023

Comment from Jim Wile

Excellent

I've been enjoying this series of gruesome contests. You have quite the imagination. Does this come naturally to you, or do you have to be stoned to come up with these ideas? At any rate, they're fun. Can't wait for the next installment of potato grenades!

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023

Thanks, Jim.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Ooh, you are so violent. What's the matter, didn't get enough hugs growing up? It is obvious, this was a setup from the start. The tree hugger devised a clever plan to get rid of tree hating goons and removed the intended (tree) victim to a safer place.

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 Comment Written 18-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023

Trees!!

reply by nomi338 on 18-Jan-2023

Breath deeply.

Comment from papa55mike

Exceptional

It sounds like the games of the future. The movie Robocop had a running theme of game shows from the future, and this would have perfectly fit in. What a wonderfully written story. Best of luck with your writing!

Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023

Thanks, Mike, for the great review. Bill