Little Princess
Expect the unexpected17 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
Special needs children are often ignored by society, and are certainly left out of our stories. Thank you for writing a story where a father is proud of his son's reaction to the little princess. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023
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Special needs children are often ignored by society, and are certainly left out of our stories. Thank you for writing a story where a father is proud of his son's reaction to the little princess. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023
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Even though Max is nearly 30, kids just love him. Thanks for reading. At any age, he is still my son. Thanks.
Comment from leather
This was a well-written entry--that was offered in two languages. It shows a level of acceptance not often seen in adults. Sometimes we can learn from children.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023
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This was a well-written entry--that was offered in two languages. It shows a level of acceptance not often seen in adults. Sometimes we can learn from children.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023
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Greatly appreciated.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely story about the joy and innacence of children. We don't hear and see enough of these stories in today's world. A proud father indeed. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest. Cheers
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
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This is a lovely story about the joy and innacence of children. We don't hear and see enough of these stories in today's world. A proud father indeed. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest. Cheers
Comment Written 15-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
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Thank you
Comment from Anne Johnston
Thank you for sharing this. One of my grandsons is a child with special needs, and he has brought a lot of joy into our family. Usually they are so happy and trusting. This is a great entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Thank you for sharing this. One of my grandsons is a child with special needs, and he has brought a lot of joy into our family. Usually they are so happy and trusting. This is a great entry for the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Thank you.
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
such a lovely story, regarding a father and his daughter. I've been on buses, and we have to keep our ears and eyes open. Be aware of strangers. Did the girl know the man she was talking to?
This story brightens a person's day!
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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such a lovely story, regarding a father and his daughter. I've been on buses, and we have to keep our ears and eyes open. Be aware of strangers. Did the girl know the man she was talking to?
This story brightens a person's day!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Comfortable stranger. 🥴
Comment from PoemsOfDD
What a gorgeous picture you have attached to this bilingual 80 word flash fiction story. Yes, the joy of observing innocent children as they interact - such a blessing. I enjoyed reading this uplift short story. Well done and best of luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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What a gorgeous picture you have attached to this bilingual 80 word flash fiction story. Yes, the joy of observing innocent children as they interact - such a blessing. I enjoyed reading this uplift short story. Well done and best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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😎 Thank you
Comment from amahra
This was a very sweet story. I like many of the new terms we use for describing people with special needs. As a teacher, I had to correct my friends when they referred to a child as slow. We called them children who process information differently. Thank you for sharing this touching story.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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This was a very sweet story. I like many of the new terms we use for describing people with special needs. As a teacher, I had to correct my friends when they referred to a child as slow. We called them children who process information differently. Thank you for sharing this touching story.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you. Glad you liked it. My sister taught these little wonders for nearly 40 years.
Comment from Mary Shifman
I don't know if this is true, but it is a sweet story. I think that without the negative influence of others, children would naturally be more inclusive of others. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
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I don't know if this is true, but it is a sweet story. I think that without the negative influence of others, children would naturally be more inclusive of others. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
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Appreciated. Thanks so much for the nice review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
How old was your son at the time? Or is this completely fiction? I find it curious that the son says that he is "Monsieur Max" and not simply "Max" if he was a child of a similar age. It's still wonderful that they could enjoy laughter together.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
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How old was your son at the time? Or is this completely fiction? I find it curious that the son says that he is "Monsieur Max" and not simply "Max" if he was a child of a similar age. It's still wonderful that they could enjoy laughter together.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
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30 years old. It fit the word count. Thanks for reading.
Comment from tempeste
I prefer the term a special needs child... back in the day they were called retarded mostly.
I just reviewed My son Max so I know that he is a very compassionate person since he was a child.
I think altruistic people have a strong aura that others feel /sense and they are drawn to it.
I like that you offered the dialogue in French too and not just the Translation in English.
Personally , I would have made myself as small as possible , praying the child just ignored me.
Im a poor human being, i m comfortable only with animals. ( sigh)
PS: I saw a tiny typo .. princesse, the E is missing. I once got a 5 in French because I forgot an E ( sigh)
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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I prefer the term a special needs child... back in the day they were called retarded mostly.
I just reviewed My son Max so I know that he is a very compassionate person since he was a child.
I think altruistic people have a strong aura that others feel /sense and they are drawn to it.
I like that you offered the dialogue in French too and not just the Translation in English.
Personally , I would have made myself as small as possible , praying the child just ignored me.
Im a poor human being, i m comfortable only with animals. ( sigh)
PS: I saw a tiny typo .. princesse, the E is missing. I once got a 5 in French because I forgot an E ( sigh)
Comment Written 10-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Thank you as always.
