Death By Murder
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Death By Murder - Chap 31"A jewel heist, rival gangs and a cold case.
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Comment from royowen
So Garth is on to Crissy, not knowing if she's ok or not, I seems to me, he suspects she may not be, but the lady contact she had was when Wyatt turned up, they don't know what they're messing with here, it's very exciting at this stage Corol, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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So Garth is on to Crissy, not knowing if she's ok or not, I seems to me, he suspects she may not be, but the lady contact she had was when Wyatt turned up, they don't know what they're messing with here, it's very exciting at this stage Corol, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Good chapter with good dialogue between Garth & Tango. Glad Garth is concerned about Crissy's not calling back. A typo: 'the sheriff rode in on his mighty (steed)...' So, is Garth getting on that plane, or is he going to check on Crissy? Hmmm... I'll wait for the next chapter. Blessings.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Good chapter with good dialogue between Garth & Tango. Glad Garth is concerned about Crissy's not calling back. A typo: 'the sheriff rode in on his mighty (steed)...' So, is Garth getting on that plane, or is he going to check on Crissy? Hmmm... I'll wait for the next chapter. Blessings.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Glad to see Tango back on action! Great job with the dialogue and hope that Crissy calls back soon or Tango finds out where she is.
I'm too far behind in reviewing so I will review only the recent posts.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Glad to see Tango back on action! Great job with the dialogue and hope that Crissy calls back soon or Tango finds out where she is.
I'm too far behind in reviewing so I will review only the recent posts.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Ricky1024
In the book "Who Done It"
Chapter Number-31
"Death by Murder"
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues
Very nice Character Selection.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly
Doctor Ricky 1024
And, have a Blessed day
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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In the book "Who Done It"
Chapter Number-31
"Death by Murder"
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues
Very nice Character Selection.
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly
Doctor Ricky 1024
And, have a Blessed day
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
If Garth is turning into a Mother Hen, he could take care of me anytime. LOL I am glad Garth and the boys are on it. I know they'll find Crissy before anything really bad happens. I really like this story.
He'd recognized that adrenaline rush in here at the bar last night. (in HER at the bar)
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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If Garth is turning into a Mother Hen, he could take care of me anytime. LOL I am glad Garth and the boys are on it. I know they'll find Crissy before anything really bad happens. I really like this story.
He'd recognized that adrenaline rush in here at the bar last night. (in HER at the bar)
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, these guys are always on the ball, which seems like a foolish enough term to be describing someone who gets the job done in most, if not all, cases. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Yes, these guys are always on the ball, which seems like a foolish enough term to be describing someone who gets the job done in most, if not all, cases. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from John Ciarmello
Oh, this chapter makes me happy, lol. I'm so glad Garth is on the case and feels there is something amiss! I'm happy things went right for her dog as well. Your saga makes me anxious! (in a good way) ;) Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Oh, this chapter makes me happy, lol. I'm so glad Garth is on the case and feels there is something amiss! I'm happy things went right for her dog as well. Your saga makes me anxious! (in a good way) ;) Best, JohnC
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
Garth's gut is telling him something is wrong and I doubt if he will make that scheduled flight. Maybe Tango will find our something and they will change their plans. As usual and I'm ready to read more of this exciting story.
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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Garth's gut is telling him something is wrong and I doubt if he will make that scheduled flight. Maybe Tango will find our something and they will change their plans. As usual and I'm ready to read more of this exciting story.
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Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!
Hugs, Carol
