Charlie's Different
Major changes from High School15 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
Too funny! Great twist in the end. I certainly did not expect that.
When I saw this needed review number fifteen, I went for it!
Good stuff!
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Too funny! Great twist in the end. I certainly did not expect that.
When I saw this needed review number fifteen, I went for it!
Good stuff!
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Comment Written 25-Nov-2023
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a surprising ending or twist to the story. It would be shocking to know a person from before but is totally different now. Like the mystery story. A good beginning and ending.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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What a surprising ending or twist to the story. It would be shocking to know a person from before but is totally different now. Like the mystery story. A good beginning and ending.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Comment from Spitfire
A innovative take on this writing prompt. Thank goodness, Sandra didn't turn out to be Charlie. Totally believable. I contacted a favorite former male student of mine through Facebook only to find out that this beautiful slender blonde lad 'came out' in college. His parents supported the change as he went extreme and donned make-up and dresses. He/she married a good-looking man anyway.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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A innovative take on this writing prompt. Thank goodness, Sandra didn't turn out to be Charlie. Totally believable. I contacted a favorite former male student of mine through Facebook only to find out that this beautiful slender blonde lad 'came out' in college. His parents supported the change as he went extreme and donned make-up and dresses. He/she married a good-looking man anyway.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Thank you. I appreciate your review and comments.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This well written story is imaginative and captivating. The description of the meeting with Charlie's sister leads the reader to wonder why there isn't more about Charlie. The surprising twist at the end answers the question. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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This well written story is imaginative and captivating. The description of the meeting with Charlie's sister leads the reader to wonder why there isn't more about Charlie. The surprising twist at the end answers the question. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Thank you. I appreciate your review and comments.
Comment from Cherish Adams
I really enjoyed this piece and especially the funny ending. It had a nice flow, is well written, clear, easy to understand and read. Well done. Good luck.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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I really enjoyed this piece and especially the funny ending. It had a nice flow, is well written, clear, easy to understand and read. Well done. Good luck.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Thank you. I appreciate your review and comments.
Comment from Wendy G
Interesting story, different and very modern. The ending was unexpected, but plausible. Well written. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Interesting story, different and very modern. The ending was unexpected, but plausible. Well written. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Thank you. I appreciate your review and comments.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Cool story.
It made me wonder whether Charlie recognized the narrator. Of course, he/she must have.
Very nicely written.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Cool story.
It made me wonder whether Charlie recognized the narrator. Of course, he/she must have.
Very nicely written.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Thank you. I appreciate your review and comments.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
This is a story with an unexpected twist. It works! I like that your character doesn't shy away from meeting Charlie again. Many. If not most, would find it uncomfortable.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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This is a story with an unexpected twist. It works! I like that your character doesn't shy away from meeting Charlie again. Many. If not most, would find it uncomfortable.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Thank you. I appreciate your review and comments.
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is an interesting entry for the contest. I suspected something was up when the main character was talking about Sandra, but I figured that she was Charlie! You took me by surprise. Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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This is an interesting entry for the contest. I suspected something was up when the main character was talking about Sandra, but I figured that she was Charlie! You took me by surprise. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Thank you. I appreciate your review and comments.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I guess these days we just never know who might be working the desk where we work under a new identity and makeup. Great job of saving the punch for the last sentence! Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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I guess these days we just never know who might be working the desk where we work under a new identity and makeup. Great job of saving the punch for the last sentence! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Thank you. I appreciate your review and comments.
