Death By Murder
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Death By Murder - Chap 30"A jewel heist, rival gangs and a cold case.
17 total reviews
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. You moved the story along nicely, I look forward to the next chapter. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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This is another excellent chapter. You moved the story along nicely, I look forward to the next chapter. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you again for reading and supporting my efforts.
Comment from John Ciarmello
I want Wyatt to get his payback so badly now, but I know that would end the suspense. The plot is getting messy, and I love messy! I can't wait for the next, Carol. Love this! Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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I want Wyatt to get his payback so badly now, but I know that would end the suspense. The plot is getting messy, and I love messy! I can't wait for the next, Carol. Love this! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Glad to hear that the dog will be okay. Now to save Crissy from that monster of a Deputy. He's going to find himself in big trouble in the next chapter I am sure. Well written, and full of suspense.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Glad to hear that the dog will be okay. Now to save Crissy from that monster of a Deputy. He's going to find himself in big trouble in the next chapter I am sure. Well written, and full of suspense.
Wendy
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Liz O'Neill
You've done well with the backstory. This says it all: "I know what you're trying to do and it ain't working." Wyatt released her and let her fall back. "I ain't falling for your tricks." The ending will draw readers back.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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You've done well with the backstory. This says it all: "I know what you're trying to do and it ain't working." Wyatt released her and let her fall back. "I ain't falling for your tricks." The ending will draw readers back.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my chapter. I do appreciate all your support.
Apologies again to all my friends...The 2023 Train barrelled into the New Year filled with an army of stress and sadness for our family again. My daughter's father-in-law's pacemaker stopped, started, stopped, and restarted, and he is presently in Hospice. My son-in-law's stepfather caught Covid on Christmas and is currently still in the ICU with little knowledge of who his family is. My granddaughter attempted the unthinkable and was admitted to a Chicago Juvenile Psych hospital, and the father of my great-granddaughters flipped out and was also involuntarily committed. I couldn't write a story like this and think people would believe it.... unfortunately it's true. And then I have been helping empty my dear cousin's home since her passing. Life is swinging sledgehammers, and I am praying I don't get hit by one of them. My apologies for burdening you with my troubles, but I wanted everyone to know why I sometimes seem to disappear. My head is above water ...just trying to keep everyone else together as well. Sending hugs to everyone who needs one!!!!
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Sending healing on all levels to all in need and courage for you.
Comment from lancellot
People seem to move around this county pretty fast. I take it Crissy will not die, otherwise Tucker would have killed her already. I don't remember him taking her cell. Maybe he did, but no one seems that smart.
Wyatt yelled into his cell, "Terry, it's Wyatt. Call me. I've got the girl."
- he left a voice mail? Wow.
Too late, she realized she'd judged his mentality wrong.
- He killed her dog. Kidnapped her and took to a cabin in the woods. Told her no one will ever find her.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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People seem to move around this county pretty fast. I take it Crissy will not die, otherwise Tucker would have killed her already. I don't remember him taking her cell. Maybe he did, but no one seems that smart.
Wyatt yelled into his cell, "Terry, it's Wyatt. Call me. I've got the girl."
- he left a voice mail? Wow.
Too late, she realized she'd judged his mentality wrong.
- He killed her dog. Kidnapped her and took to a cabin in the woods. Told her no one will ever find her.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my chapter. I do appreciate all your support.
Apologies again to all my friends...The 2023 Train barrelled into the New Year filled with an army of stress and sadness for our family again. My daughter's father-in-law's pacemaker stopped, started, stopped, and restarted, and he is presently in Hospice. My son-in-law's stepfather caught Covid on Christmas and is currently still in the ICU with little knowledge of who his family is. My granddaughter attempted the unthinkable and was admitted to a Chicago Juvenile Psych hospital, and the father of my great-granddaughters flipped out and was also involuntarily committed. I couldn't write a story like this and think people would believe it.... unfortunately it's true. And then I have been helping empty my dear cousin's home since her passing. Life is swinging sledgehammers, and I am praying I don't get hit by one of them. My apologies for burdening you with my troubles, but I wanted everyone to know why I sometimes seem to disappear. My head is above water ...just trying to keep everyone else together as well. Sending hugs to everyone who needs one!!!!
Comment from LJbutterfly
I forgot all about the jewels. This is so riveting all I can do is hang onto my chair as I sit at the computer. Your descriptions are so detailed I feel as though I'm watching a movie. I'm glad to hear Brandi will survive. I've read two of your novels, and I think this one is the best. I'll gladly wait on the next chapter. I have to calm down from this one.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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I forgot all about the jewels. This is so riveting all I can do is hang onto my chair as I sit at the computer. Your descriptions are so detailed I feel as though I'm watching a movie. I'm glad to hear Brandi will survive. I've read two of your novels, and I think this one is the best. I'll gladly wait on the next chapter. I have to calm down from this one.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
And the noose tightens around Wyatt's neck, I hope. Plus, I knew you wouldn't let anything too serious happen to that beautiful dog. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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And the noose tightens around Wyatt's neck, I hope. Plus, I knew you wouldn't let anything too serious happen to that beautiful dog. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Wyatt is having a bad day, maybe even worse than Crissy's. At least her dog was saved. Your story has a lot of plot twists and no holes as far as I can see, although you have a lot of characters. Best wishes for a wonderful New Year.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Wyatt is having a bad day, maybe even worse than Crissy's. At least her dog was saved. Your story has a lot of plot twists and no holes as far as I can see, although you have a lot of characters. Best wishes for a wonderful New Year.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
It looks like Wyaty's days of a gangster lackie may be numbered, I'd high tale it out of there if I were him. Poor Crissie, I wonder what Wyatt will do with her, and in fact will he be able to get som provisions to her, or will she be clever enough to free herself, well done blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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It looks like Wyaty's days of a gangster lackie may be numbered, I'd high tale it out of there if I were him. Poor Crissie, I wonder what Wyatt will do with her, and in fact will he be able to get som provisions to her, or will she be clever enough to free herself, well done blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!
Hugs, Carol
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Most welcome Carol
Comment from Ulla
Well, I certainly hope this Wyatt won't get away with it. It seems the rope is tightening around his neck, so to speak. Great chapter and I'm glad to hear the dog will be okay. Ulla xx
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Well, I certainly hope this Wyatt won't get away with it. It seems the rope is tightening around his neck, so to speak. Great chapter and I'm glad to hear the dog will be okay. Ulla xx
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!
Hugs, Carol