Comment from Jewell McChesney

Excellent

This is beautiful poetry, Bill. You have always had a way with words. It can be difficult to find the proper thing to say when one has had loss. But You have eloquently expressed a lovely sentiment.

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Practicing

Always, Jewell
Formerly Visionary Poet.

P.S. I am now very active with my art over at fanartreview! Come see!

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023

I owe you big time apology for letting this go so wrong... timing and life got in the way... you are always so kind and sweet I hold your words close to heart... Hugs... Bill

Comment from JT traveller

Good

Well composed and well received. Obviously you had a loving, caring mother. Others are not so lucky. Heartfelt prose. Thankyou for sharing your story.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023

Yes, I did as a matter of fact... She was lovely, and a pioneer of spirit, forging ahead no matter what... ... Thanks so much for the review... Bill

Comment from Nicki Nance

Excellent

This is a sweet and poignant message of support. I like that you are guiding him to reach back through his early experiences. "Reach for what she gave you" is compelling.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022

Very nice, review... I had no idea what this would bring... but sure liked your words... as you gave me insight too... Happy New Year... Bill