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A tale of love, magic, and revenge.

2 total reviews 
Comment from Ricky1024
Excellent
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"A Firelit Night"
Was written just right, Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I apologize for the delay. It?s been nightmarish at work, so all writing went to back burner. I really appreciate your time and attention. Have a wonderful day!
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent
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Well, I didn't find this chapter so terrible. It is a very good description of passion between two entities. Your chapter is well written, and I enjoyed every word. I look forward to the next chapter.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I apologize for the delay in response. It?s been nightmarish at work, so all writing went to back burner. I really appreciate your time and attention. Have a wonderful day!