The Forgetful Husband
A husband with selective memory9 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A very clever piece of dialogue fiction which is both heart-warming (despite the weather!) and believable! Rounded off with a perfect final line. Well done and good luck, Debbie
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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A very clever piece of dialogue fiction which is both heart-warming (despite the weather!) and believable! Rounded off with a perfect final line. Well done and good luck, Debbie
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, Debbie, for a great review.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Very good story, and reflects the state of mind of millions of head-in-the-cloud husband's ( and that includes me!)
Very well written.
Congratulations for your great ranking!
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Very good story, and reflects the state of mind of millions of head-in-the-cloud husband's ( and that includes me!)
Very well written.
Congratulations for your great ranking!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your review and your congratulations.
Comment from Wendy G
Lol. So close to my own experiences here (apart from being snowed in! ) He often comes home with different things! Your humorous dialogue is well written, and very true to life! Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Lol. So close to my own experiences here (apart from being snowed in! ) He often comes home with different things! Your humorous dialogue is well written, and very true to life! Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Thank you, dear Wendy.
Comment from BethShelby
This is cute. You're lucky it isn't your husband unless you mean the handsome part Most men would assume we call for a reason and not just because we want to hear their voice. Almost all of the men would forget what you ask for unless they wrote it down, and a lot of them would forget to remember you wanted anything.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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This is cute. You're lucky it isn't your husband unless you mean the handsome part Most men would assume we call for a reason and not just because we want to hear their voice. Almost all of the men would forget what you ask for unless they wrote it down, and a lot of them would forget to remember you wanted anything.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the excellent review. Happy New Year to you, Beth
Comment from Bill Schott
This dialogue-only story, The Forgetful Husband, is a fun exchange between forgetful husband and the forgiving wife. I know that being a handsome fellow comes in handy.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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This dialogue-only story, The Forgetful Husband, is a fun exchange between forgetful husband and the forgiving wife. I know that being a handsome fellow comes in handy.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Thanks for a great review and smile!
Comment from Raul1
This story meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Exceptional work! No mistakes found in your poetry. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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This story meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Exceptional work! No mistakes found in your poetry. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 31-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much, Raul, for your review with six stars! Wow!
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You're welcome!
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. And even if it were not fictional, you'd still love your husband! That's funny and I can see my hubby doing something like this. He definitely would prefer ice cream and cake over cabbage soup!
Best wishes in the contest!!
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Lol. And even if it were not fictional, you'd still love your husband! That's funny and I can see my hubby doing something like this. He definitely would prefer ice cream and cake over cabbage soup!
Best wishes in the contest!!
Comment Written 31-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much, Helen. Hugs!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
An endearing story played out in dialogue only and it works beautifully. By their conversation alone we see their love and affection for each other, her ready forgiveness, and his sense of humor. Thanks for sharing your story with us. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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An endearing story played out in dialogue only and it works beautifully. By their conversation alone we see their love and affection for each other, her ready forgiveness, and his sense of humor. Thanks for sharing your story with us. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much, and I'm so glad you picked up the undertones.
Comment from jessizero
I got a real kick out of your dialogue-only story. I am glad it is fictional, as this would be a bad thing to happen in real life. I am glad your husband isn't like this really. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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I got a real kick out of your dialogue-only story. I am glad it is fictional, as this would be a bad thing to happen in real life. I am glad your husband isn't like this really. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Thank you, jessi, and Happy New Year.