Death By Murder
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Death By Murder - Chap 29"A jewel heist, rival gangs and a cold case.
17 total reviews
Comment from eliz100
This is an excellent chapter. It is a sit-on-the-edge-of-your-seat chapter, wondering what comes next. Ido did not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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This is an excellent chapter. It is a sit-on-the-edge-of-your-seat chapter, wondering what comes next. Ido did not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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I appreciate your support. Thank You!
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, I don't understand this chapter. I get why it has to happen, but it's the how.
How did he catch up to Crissy so fast or find her? Why would she just pull off the road in the middle of nowhere, with no one around, after what she found? How did Tucker even see her? How did he sneak up on her and her not hear or see him? Why tell him she was going to call the FBI? What was he supposed to say, "Go right ahead, I'll wait."
Why after he pulled a gun, broke her window, and shot her dog would she not floor it? Why would she still try to talk to him? After all that, why would she imagine he would take her "dog" to a vet; he shot it? I mean she is some form of reporter, right?
In this scene, I began to root for the deputy to kill her, because she is too dumb to deserve life.
"Why wouldn't you help my dog?"
Why would she say this, after what he just told her? Is she the world's dumbest human?
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Hmm, I don't understand this chapter. I get why it has to happen, but it's the how.
How did he catch up to Crissy so fast or find her? Why would she just pull off the road in the middle of nowhere, with no one around, after what she found? How did Tucker even see her? How did he sneak up on her and her not hear or see him? Why tell him she was going to call the FBI? What was he supposed to say, "Go right ahead, I'll wait."
Why after he pulled a gun, broke her window, and shot her dog would she not floor it? Why would she still try to talk to him? After all that, why would she imagine he would take her "dog" to a vet; he shot it? I mean she is some form of reporter, right?
In this scene, I began to root for the deputy to kill her, because she is too dumb to deserve life.
"Why wouldn't you help my dog?"
Why would she say this, after what he just told her? Is she the world's dumbest human?
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
I read the episodes out of order, but your great story always makes its impression on me this is the prequel to Crissy being sidelined and held as a captive in the old cabin in the bush, beautifully written my friend, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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I read the episodes out of order, but your great story always makes its impression on me this is the prequel to Crissy being sidelined and held as a captive in the old cabin in the bush, beautifully written my friend, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!
Hugs, Carol
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Always a pleasure
Comment from LJbutterfly
Wow! Oh wow! This was intense. It moved so quickly that before I knew it, Brandi was lying on the side of the road. I didn't expect that to happen. What's going to happen to Crissy? Carol, what have you done? Hopefully I'll find out in Chapter 30.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Wow! Oh wow! This was intense. It moved so quickly that before I knew it, Brandi was lying on the side of the road. I didn't expect that to happen. What's going to happen to Crissy? Carol, what have you done? Hopefully I'll find out in Chapter 30.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Ulla
Wow, Carol, that was a dramatic chapter and rather traumatic.as well. I can't believe what Wyatt did in the name of the law.band what about the dog? Oh I can't stand this.
Very well written. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Wow, Carol, that was a dramatic chapter and rather traumatic.as well. I can't believe what Wyatt did in the name of the law.band what about the dog? Oh I can't stand this.
Very well written. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yep, sometimes we just don't know who the real good guys or bad guys are for sure. So maybe, we'd just better start using something besides a badge to differentiate between them. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Yep, sometimes we just don't know who the real good guys or bad guys are for sure. So maybe, we'd just better start using something besides a badge to differentiate between them. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you as always for your support and for taking the time to read my story. Hope the New Year is being kind to you!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from John Ciarmello
Oh, Carol!! What a fantastic chapter! I feel so bad for both Brandie and Crissy! It left me sad, with this weird exhilaration coursing through me. Brilliant writing!! Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Oh, Carol!! What a fantastic chapter! I feel so bad for both Brandie and Crissy! It left me sad, with this weird exhilaration coursing through me. Brilliant writing!! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Now you my friend certainly know how to start my year off with a bang... shiny stars and all your kindness. I am thrilled you are enjoying the story. Thank you so much.
HAPPY NEW YEAR - Hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
A terrifying situation for Crissy! Poor injured Brandi is left alone to fend for herself. Wyatt doesn't belong on the police force any more. He's just making things worse for himself. Great chapter, well written.
Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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A terrifying situation for Crissy! Poor injured Brandi is left alone to fend for herself. Wyatt doesn't belong on the police force any more. He's just making things worse for himself. Great chapter, well written.
Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Now you my friend certainly know how to start my year off with a bang... shiny stars and all your kindness. I am thrilled you are enjoying the story. Thank you so much.
HAPPY NEW YEAR - Hugs, Carol
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You're welcome. You're a great writer.
Comment from Shirley McLain
You created a great chapter full of fear and action. I hate that the dog was shot. How is Crissy going to get away from the deputy? Have a great afternoon. Shirley
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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You created a great chapter full of fear and action. I hate that the dog was shot. How is Crissy going to get away from the deputy? Have a great afternoon. Shirley
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Now you my friend certainly know how to start my year off with a bang... shiny stars and all your kindness. I am thrilled you are enjoying the story. Thank you so much.
HAPPY NEW YEAR - Hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Garth needs to come to the rescue and right now. I know Hank and Emmy are on their way too. Brandi needs help and now, and so does Crissy. I can't wait for the next post. Sending love and prayers.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Garth needs to come to the rescue and right now. I know Hank and Emmy are on their way too. Brandi needs help and now, and so does Crissy. I can't wait for the next post. Sending love and prayers.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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HAPPY NEW YEAR, BARBARA
Congratulations for coming in the top of the pack for novelists this year. Awesome. I hope things will settle for me and I can go back and read your story. It was so good and I really want to know how it continued.
Smiles, Carol
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You remain in my prayers. I am praying that you have a great 2023.
