Within the Bone
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "A Demon's Task"A tale of love, magic, and revenge.
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Comment from Ricky1024
A chapter in the book entitled,
"Within the Bone"
"The Demons Task" was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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A chapter in the book entitled,
"Within the Bone"
"The Demons Task" was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 30-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I appreciate the feedback and I'm glad it came out well. I hope you have a wonderful New Year's.
Comment from lancellot
A very well written chapter. I wonder if the two will be able leave in the middle of the night as unobserved as they hope. I also, have doubts about Caliban.
I think you a great job setting up for a larger journey slash adventure.
Great writing.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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A very well written chapter. I wonder if the two will be able leave in the middle of the night as unobserved as they hope. I also, have doubts about Caliban.
I think you a great job setting up for a larger journey slash adventure.
Great writing.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate your time and attention. I'm glad the setup went as well as it did. I hope you have a wonderful New Year's.
