Honoring others
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "FS Family New Year's"Any occasion
65 total reviews
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
Happy safe New Year yes indeed. I love your rhyme and presentation. Your words flow so smooth. What you have written is a wish that would want for all my family and friends and the world besides peace. Well done!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
  |
Happy safe New Year yes indeed. I love your rhyme and presentation. Your words flow so smooth. What you have written is a wish that would want for all my family and friends and the world besides peace. Well done!
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
-
Moonbeams, I apologize for this being so late. My eye specialist has restricted my time on my ipad for a while, but I wanted to make sure you knew how much your awesome review means to me. Especially since you are one of the wonderful people that it is for. Thank you so much for your very kind words for my poem. They are so appreciated, my dear friend!
-
❤️❤️❤️
Comment from irishauthorme
Great! I think you expressed the thoughts and feelings of many of us here-together- on FanStory.
I am grateful for this site where we can post our efforts and get the feedback we need to improve our craft. So many nice people, and many great talents!
The end of the year is a time for reflection and gratitude for all we are given.
Like you, I hope that all who celebrate with a toddy stay home.
Happy New year!
irish
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
|
Great! I think you expressed the thoughts and feelings of many of us here-together- on FanStory.
I am grateful for this site where we can post our efforts and get the feedback we need to improve our craft. So many nice people, and many great talents!
The end of the year is a time for reflection and gratitude for all we are given.
Like you, I hope that all who celebrate with a toddy stay home.
Happy New year!
irish
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
-
Irish, I apologize for this being so late. My eye specialist has restricted my time on my ipad for a while, but I wanted to make sure you knew how much your awesome review means to me. Especially since you are one of the wonderful people that it is for. Thank you so much for your very kind words for my poem. They are so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from jessizero
I loved your New Year's poem! It was so sweet of you to think of us as your second family. Thank you so much for sharing your letter to us, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
|
I loved your New Year's poem! It was so sweet of you to think of us as your second family. Thank you so much for sharing your letter to us, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
-
Jessi, I apologize for this being so late. My eye specialist has restricted my time on my ipad for a while, but I wanted to make sure you knew how much your awesome review means to me. Especially since you are one of the wonderful people that it is for. Thank you so much for your very kind words for my poem. They are so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from karenina
I had no idea you enjoyed monorhyme so much!
You surely did it up proud in each stanza as you emphasized the positive aspects of finding your niche here and sharing your heart and your talent.
You've made quite the mark since you joined FanStory and I especially enjoyed the "for honesty and not pretense" line.
When we write from the heart it's nice to be felt by the heart... I won't drink and drive. I'll TRY not to drink and WRITE! LOL...
Happy New Year Debi!
May all your wonderful progress toward improving health and mobility continue in 2023!
Karenina
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
 |
I had no idea you enjoyed monorhyme so much!
You surely did it up proud in each stanza as you emphasized the positive aspects of finding your niche here and sharing your heart and your talent.
You've made quite the mark since you joined FanStory and I especially enjoyed the "for honesty and not pretense" line.
When we write from the heart it's nice to be felt by the heart... I won't drink and drive. I'll TRY not to drink and WRITE! LOL...
Happy New Year Debi!
May all your wonderful progress toward improving health and mobility continue in 2023!
Karenina
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
-
Hey Sweetie, yes, I do love monorhyme and even more if the challenge is for the whole poem to have one rhyme. I thank you for such lovely words for you and the rest of this wonderful family here. And of course I appreciate your six stars, because it is something I will never return. Never!!! So it is so appreciated my friend and sister. You are so special and I just love you to pieces but you already knew that. Thanks again Angel lady. I hope Ed's night went well and very uneventful.
-
He's home...all else is just little stuff.
Now to get him stronger! Loved your poem!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
-Excellent poem entry for the New Years Poem writing prompt contest.
-Good rhyme that doesn't feel forced.
-thank you for the new year's greetings, same to you.
-Nice presentation and picture.
-Your descriptive words flow well expressing a clear mental image.
-Good luck in the cont
Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
|
-Excellent poem entry for the New Years Poem writing prompt contest.
-Good rhyme that doesn't feel forced.
-thank you for the new year's greetings, same to you.
-Nice presentation and picture.
-Your descriptive words flow well expressing a clear mental image.
-Good luck in the cont
Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
-
Gypsy, I apologize for this being so late. My eye specialist has restricted my time on my ipad for a while, but I wanted to make sure you knew how much your awesome review means to me. Especially since you are one of the wonderful people that it is for. Thank you so much for your very kind words for my poem. They are so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from royowen
Because I don't drink, (not even a skerrick, unless it's soft drink or water) it would be difficult to both drink and drive. But it's incredibly good form for you to request as a fellow writer and exponent of the ancient art of scribing. What a beautiful introduction to the New Year dear Debi, I hope All is well with you and family, beautifully written and good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
|
Because I don't drink, (not even a skerrick, unless it's soft drink or water) it would be difficult to both drink and drive. But it's incredibly good form for you to request as a fellow writer and exponent of the ancient art of scribing. What a beautiful introduction to the New Year dear Debi, I hope All is well with you and family, beautifully written and good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
-
Ricky, I apologize for this being so late. My eye specialist has restricted my time on my ipad for a while, but I wanted to make sure you knew how much your awesome review means to me. Thank you so much for your very kind words for my poem. They are so appreciated, my dear friend!
-
Don?t apologise Debi, I know you have good reason, bless you
Comment from Aiona
I am outta sixes, but this poem certainly deserves six. I love the rhyming scheme. I am partial to rhyming poems, and the topic is very poignant. It makes me wanna write a love letter to my writing cadre too!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
|
I am outta sixes, but this poem certainly deserves six. I love the rhyming scheme. I am partial to rhyming poems, and the topic is very poignant. It makes me wanna write a love letter to my writing cadre too!
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
-
Aiona, you are so sweet. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my poem. It's so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Right back at ya', Debi.
You did an awesome job with you New Year's contest entry.
I loved reading it. I loved the monorhyme within each verse.
Your words were straight from your heart. I loved how you
included yourself and expanded to include the FS family.
Your font choice, color scheme, and message all worked
together to create a memorable poem. Maybe one size larger
font would help the curl letters be easier to read. You are an
awesome asset to FS in everything you do.
YOU and yours have a blessed New Year.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
|
Right back at ya', Debi.
You did an awesome job with you New Year's contest entry.
I loved reading it. I loved the monorhyme within each verse.
Your words were straight from your heart. I loved how you
included yourself and expanded to include the FS family.
Your font choice, color scheme, and message all worked
together to create a memorable poem. Maybe one size larger
font would help the curl letters be easier to read. You are an
awesome asset to FS in everything you do.
YOU and yours have a blessed New Year.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
-
Jan, you are so sweet. I don't know what I would ever do without you. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my poem. Also thanks for the lovely six stars. It's so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from estory
I think your poem does a great job of celebrating what we have on Fanstory: the personalities, the talents, the stories, the poems that take you on journeys of the soul. And our desire to keep it going into the New Year. estory
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
|
I think your poem does a great job of celebrating what we have on Fanstory: the personalities, the talents, the stories, the poems that take you on journeys of the soul. And our desire to keep it going into the New Year. estory
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
-
Estory, you are so sweet. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my poem. It's so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Debi. I really appreciate your New Years poem, the picture was so heart warming. Your wishes to spend another year with us was delightful. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
|
Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Debi. I really appreciate your New Years poem, the picture was so heart warming. Your wishes to spend another year with us was delightful. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
-
Ali, you are so sweet. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my poem. It's so appreciated, my dear friend!
-
You are so very welcome, Debi. Happy New Year's to you and yours!
