Enlightenment
Simplicity11 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Very true; we do teach ourselves daily. We are good teachers to be able to take care of ourselves; but I do not think I could live day by day if I didn't have the greatest teacher on earth, Jesus, praying for me.
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Very true; we do teach ourselves daily. We are good teachers to be able to take care of ourselves; but I do not think I could live day by day if I didn't have the greatest teacher on earth, Jesus, praying for me.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
Comment from Karyn2
I like the idea of this. We are always learning, growing in understanding and informing ourselves. Perhaps we can be better teachers for ourselves if we have drive and determination than those with degrees. I wonder though, if it is life that teaches us the greatest lessons as we wonder through and experience it? Food for thought! Thanks for sharing and good luck in the competition!.
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I like the idea of this. We are always learning, growing in understanding and informing ourselves. Perhaps we can be better teachers for ourselves if we have drive and determination than those with degrees. I wonder though, if it is life that teaches us the greatest lessons as we wonder through and experience it? Food for thought! Thanks for sharing and good luck in the competition!.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the 1 Line Only writing prompt contest
Good one line poem form.
I love the imagery and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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Wonderful entry for the 1 Line Only writing prompt contest
Good one line poem form.
I love the imagery and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Learning is something we never stop doing and if we can teach someone and save their embarrassment at not knowing something, then we have succeeded in teaching and learning at the same time, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Learning is something we never stop doing and if we can teach someone and save their embarrassment at not knowing something, then we have succeeded in teaching and learning at the same time, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
Comment from June Sargent
A short but thought-provoking piece! It is so true. It is entirely up to us whether we are willing to learn life's lessons. We can just close the book and walk away - none the wiser.
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A short but thought-provoking piece! It is so true. It is entirely up to us whether we are willing to learn life's lessons. We can just close the book and walk away - none the wiser.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good one-line entry. The message is clearly stated and speaks a truth that many act as if they do not know. The visual fits well. It reminds me of a meditation site. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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This is a good one-line entry. The message is clearly stated and speaks a truth that many act as if they do not know. The visual fits well. It reminds me of a meditation site. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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Hi Sandra, thanks so much for the very kind words and review. I really appreciate the encouragement.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Kayte Ray
Nice thought and great image it accompany it.
You manage to engage the reader with one line. This is a very well written piece that is relatable and presents a complete image in the mind of the reader. Good job.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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Nice thought and great image it accompany it.
You manage to engage the reader with one line. This is a very well written piece that is relatable and presents a complete image in the mind of the reader. Good job.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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Hi Kayte, thanks very much for the kind words and review.
Comment from jessizero
This is a nice piece of truth in just six words. I am impressed that you expressed yourself so succinctly. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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This is a nice piece of truth in just six words. I am impressed that you expressed yourself so succinctly. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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Hi Jessizero, thanks so much for the kind words and review. Take care.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-I like your title and the topic.
-A good message about how
we can all be our "own teacher,"
whether it's finding something new
or finding meaning in something that's
been around for centuries.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-I like your title and the topic.
-A good message about how
we can all be our "own teacher,"
whether it's finding something new
or finding meaning in something that's
been around for centuries.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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Hi Pam, thanks very much for the kind review and encouragement.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from royowen
The things I've learned in life are all due to observation and perception, but that depends on what one's life is founded on. If it's sand then the basis is never sound, it has to be rock, and that initially comes from parental influence, non of us is truly independent. Well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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The things I've learned in life are all due to observation and perception, but that depends on what one's life is founded on. If it's sand then the basis is never sound, it has to be rock, and that initially comes from parental influence, non of us is truly independent. Well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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Hi Roy, thanks so much for the kind review.
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Most welcome
